A Virus Life For Me

by tenqui

Original COMPLETED Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Magic Non-Human lead Reincarnation

Poor Mark just cannot catch a break.  First he dies saving another person and is summoned in front of the "Overbeing".  The "Overbeing" gives Mark choices for his next reincarnation due to his selfless act.  However, all is not as it seems.  Just before being sent off to experience his next life as an evolver Mark overhears another person talking to the "Overbeing".  It seems Mark was somehow a threat to the "Overbeing" and was eliminated and sent on his way before he could cause problems.  Now that Mark knows what happens he vows to attain enough power to overcome the "Overbeing" and thus fulfill what he was eliminated for in the first place.  However, to do that he must master his evolver abilities and make it through a new world where magic and monsters are real.

Man reincarnates into a simple virus.  Must figure out how to evolve into more dangerous and significant things.  Hijinks, hilarity, and hopefully action occur along the way.

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Chapter Name Release Date
Death and Rebirth ago
1 - Becoming A Virus ago
2 - The Infection Spreads ago
3 - Call To War ago
4 - Chimera Achieved ago
5 - Mana Rainbow ago
6 - Evolution Is Fun To Do ago
7 - My Progress Goes Viral ago
8 - Magic ago
9 - I Can See ago
10 - Teleportation Success ago
11 - Bugs Can Be Cool Too ago
12 - My First "Real" Battle ago
13 - Back to Basics ago
Announcement (Good One) ago
14 - Dying is NOT Fun ago
15 - Starting Over ago
16 - Training And Exploring ago
17 - Honey Trap ago
18 - Sweet Plans ago
19 - Beepocalypse ago
20 - Level UP ago
21 - King Of The Pond ago
22 - Moving On ago
23 - Magic Makes Things Easier ago
24 - Goblin Extermination ago
25 - Plains Hunter ago
26 - Mountain Man ago
27 - Mysterious Cave ago
28 - Dungeon Dive ago
29 - Dungeon Boss ago
30 - Choices and Grinding ago
31 - Meeting The Neighbors ago
32 - Solo Is Much Easier ago
33 - Idiot Ivan ago
34 - Final Challenge ago
35 - Senior Level ago
36 - Mantis In The Big City ago
37 - Vulcan Academy ago
38 - Impressing The Teachers ago
39 - Finding a Mentor ago
40 - Headmaster's Tasks ago
41 - Gearing Up ago
42 - Miss Helen's Training ago
43 - Getting Stronger ago
44 - Training and New Spells ago
45 - End of Training ago
46 - Demi-God Level ago
47 - Power Up ago
48 - Tournament Time ago
49 - Tournament Ranking ago
50 - Deity World ago
51 - Merit Debt ago
51 - Merit Debt ago
52 - Back Too My Roots ago
53 - Mystery Of God Power ago
54 - Breaking A Monopoly ago
55 - Leveling Up Again ago
56 - Universe Level Spell ago
57 - Revenge!!! ago

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monoliith
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Chapter 7 and looking great!

Looking really good say far (as of ch. 7). I loved King of the Mountain. Can't wait to see what you do with a Re:

Be careful, most of the Re: stories i've read all end up stagnating after making the MC so overpowered they have trouble with the story. Then again, you did that in KotM and it was great all the way to the finish!

Pierre le loup
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I really loved king of the mountain and I hope I will also love this one.The idea of a virus is not overuse so it let people wonder about what will happen next. For the moment we don't have a lot of information on the character but he has a lot of potential. I really waited for a story like this and the one I saw were dropped and I know that the author doesn't drop story so I'm truly happy. Five star just for the potential. Sorry for grammar.

Mighty Moushie
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Give it a chance, you might just like it!

So I just finished the book, and it was a wonderful read.  The only issue I really have is the rush to the end, as there are a lot of timeskips.  Other than that, you should give it a read.  The character is interesting, and doesn't keep making idiotic decisions to move the story forward.  The story moves smoothly, and in a believable fashion.  There might be an occasional grammar error, but I don't remember any glaring issues with it at all.

Suzaku128
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I like the story and the beginning is promising. Nothing to add though. Keep up the good work.

Zorter
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A Very Different Stor From the Other

I like genre isekai ( reincarnation ) but most isekai use same trope over and over again but this one it's different and honestly i like it you reincarnated as a virus in some body and you invect the other and kill certain R.O.B

breton
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Keep it up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                                 

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Not_an_alien
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Nice but the ending was a little lackluster

Reviewed at: 57 - Revenge!!!

Everything in the story is good except for the ending, I just feel like it was rushed and a little poorly planned.

And there wasn't much emphasis on the virus part for 80% of the entire story.

But i probably couldn't do any better.

vladerag
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I think the best way I can describe my feelings for this story is the following statement: if you replaced all of the character interactions with the protagonist reading from an FAQ I am not sure I would be able to tell the difference.

Characters - and I use the term very loosely here - exist only for the purpose of spouting exposition to the protagonist.  They are always either amazed at the protagonists strength or telling him how to get stronger and literally nothing else.  There is no character development, or indeed any notable development at all.

While one could argue the main characters strength and power does develop, that hardly bares mentioning.  It is only a few chapters in that the main character becomes more or less immortal and nothing poses a threat to him short of the elimination of all life on the planet down to the microbes.  

There is no challenge to overcome, no character that truly matters to the protagonist - and that is also an actual character and not just an FAQ - and no events or locations with any significant impact.  It is a dry read and lacks excitement to an almost appalling degree.

If you have nothing else to read, it is better than staring at a wall and wondering if your life has meaning.  If you have anything else to read through, I'd suggest reading that.