A Virus Life For Me

by tenqui

Original COMPLETED Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Magic Non-Human lead Reincarnation

Poor Mark just cannot catch a break.  First he dies saving another person and is summoned in front of the "Overbeing".  The "Overbeing" gives Mark choices for his next reincarnation due to his selfless act.  However, all is not as it seems.  Just before being sent off to experience his next life as an evolver Mark overhears another person talking to the "Overbeing".  It seems Mark was somehow a threat to the "Overbeing" and was eliminated and sent on his way before he could cause problems.  Now that Mark knows what happens he vows to attain enough power to overcome the "Overbeing" and thus fulfill what he was eliminated for in the first place.  However, to do that he must master his evolver abilities and make it through a new world where magic and monsters are real.

Man reincarnates into a simple virus.  Must figure out how to evolve into more dangerous and significant things.  Hijinks, hilarity, and hopefully action occur along the way.

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Chapter Name Release Date
Death and Rebirth ago
1 - Becoming A Virus ago
2 - The Infection Spreads ago
3 - Call To War ago
4 - Chimera Achieved ago
5 - Mana Rainbow ago
6 - Evolution Is Fun To Do ago
7 - My Progress Goes Viral ago
8 - Magic ago
9 - I Can See ago
10 - Teleportation Success ago
11 - Bugs Can Be Cool Too ago
12 - My First "Real" Battle ago
13 - Back to Basics ago
Announcement (Good One) ago
14 - Dying is NOT Fun ago
15 - Starting Over ago
16 - Training And Exploring ago
17 - Honey Trap ago
18 - Sweet Plans ago
19 - Beepocalypse ago
20 - Level UP ago
21 - King Of The Pond ago
22 - Moving On ago
23 - Magic Makes Things Easier ago
24 - Goblin Extermination ago
25 - Plains Hunter ago
26 - Mountain Man ago
27 - Mysterious Cave ago
28 - Dungeon Dive ago
29 - Dungeon Boss ago
30 - Choices and Grinding ago
31 - Meeting The Neighbors ago
32 - Solo Is Much Easier ago
33 - Idiot Ivan ago
34 - Final Challenge ago
35 - Senior Level ago
36 - Mantis In The Big City ago
37 - Vulcan Academy ago
38 - Impressing The Teachers ago
39 - Finding a Mentor ago
40 - Headmaster's Tasks ago
41 - Gearing Up ago
42 - Miss Helen's Training ago
43 - Getting Stronger ago
44 - Training and New Spells ago
45 - End of Training ago
46 - Demi-God Level ago
47 - Power Up ago
48 - Tournament Time ago
49 - Tournament Ranking ago
50 - Deity World ago
51 - Merit Debt ago
51 - Merit Debt ago
52 - Back Too My Roots ago
53 - Mystery Of God Power ago
54 - Breaking A Monopoly ago
55 - Leveling Up Again ago
56 - Universe Level Spell ago
57 - Revenge!!! ago

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Matt598
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Great First 50 chapters

This story has a really good start, however around 2/3rds of the way through time-skips start to rush the end fast, but with only 495 pages I guess part of that I should have seen coming.

Paused to switch devices at chapter 55 and didn't realize there was only 2 chapters left after that, to be fair the author is providing a ROUGH draft of sorts for free, and is going to sell a revised version with some of these issues fixed at a later point on Amazon. 

 

Honestly though, we get to read this for free, and it was a very enjoyable read with some interesting takes for a LIT-RPG, wish we saw some more of the weapon based combat with the 

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But honestly, the interpretation of magic and just how someone might auctually level up with things was pretty spot on, and really the only regret is that the ending was rushed, and could have really used 1 more chapter of epilogue or something to not leave us craving more.

Deuxz
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Really disappointing.

Very dissapointing. Started off wonderful but about midway through he stopped caring about improving and just wanted to rush finish it, over all the ending was complete garbage and you shouldn't read this if you don't want to be dissapointed.

And the whole unique this about being a virus was completley forgotten about after a few chapters, so if you planned on staying around for that, don't bother.

M8D3
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i am enjoying this new story as much as I did the previous one and look forward to seeing where it goes.

Gigatony
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I'm a big fan of LitRPG ! (even if the tag is missing...)
I've seen all sort of non-human MC and i'm bored of goblins, dungoens and slimes.
But a virus in a fantasy world ? The concept is really enticing me.

Its a bit too early to judge but i want this story to flourish and encourage the author to keep going with it to see the end product, so i will give it 5 stars for now and give the score it deserves when it will reach a decent number of chapters to rate it.

Good luck.

Bored monster
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I just want to say that I love this story. I did feel as though some parts were forced to show how cool the MC is.

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 But all of that doesn't even hold the candle to the dialogue. It's so forced and bland that I usually just skip it.

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crasher32
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good job mate this is a pretty good story and i've only read the first chaps

good luck and god speed

TheRealSlimShady
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So, let me get this straight. this guy can become anyone he wants, and he chooses to become a bug? ruined the story for me. i gave up once i realized he is going to choose to stay a bug for awhile . too bad could of been an awesome book if he would of chosen a elf or human. 

Namelesswanderer
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The story was great all around last chapter was both best and worst in their own way. But love it all the same. Other than few grammatical errors (but really who cares I could understand and got what was being said enough said) story was amazing this is my second microscopic protag story and I love them they are different so much possibility and hilarious monologing or even mass destruction and chaos.

cursed_spark
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i liked the story... 

but the way it ended just felt wrong. like it was april fools joke or if it was going to continue... perhaps the author was fed up with the story and wanted to end it sooner than later? 

I dunno...

Jakylorhide
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Just finished binging this and i really enjoyed it.

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