Primal Devotion

Primal Devotion

by Scott Cross

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Hi all. This is a short story that I was thinking of expanding into a book. Would love to get some feedback. :)

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 I just finished Ch. 3 and have realy enjoyed the story so far. It would be nice if this became a full length book or a short story. I would just recomend adding in some more scene description and some more insight on what the MC is thinking. Cant wait for an update and to see how this story and its chracters develope😊