“Will you be out long?” Sev asked from his arm chair.

Ever since his children had moved out of the house he had kept a constant eye on me, as if scared I’d run off too, leaving him alone.

“I need to go to the market to get generator parts,” I reminded, as I put on my sandals. “If I don’t show up he’ll sell them to someone else. And then you’ll complain that you have to repair it every week.”

“I know that!” Sev snapped, then turned away, pretending to be reading the local paper. “I just wanted to know when dinner will be ready.”

The same old excuse. He was too proud to admit he wanted me nearby, but too selfish to keep silent about it. With age the line between complaints and compliments had eroded to the point that most couldn’t tell the two apart.

“I’ll be back before dark.” I straightened my dress and opened the door. “Do you want anything from the market?” I glanced over my shoulder.

“Nah,” Sev grumbled, hiding his face behind the paper.

“See you later.”

“And get some antibiotics!” I heard Sev shout as I stepped outside. “But don’t pay too much!”

“Sure thing.” I set off.

The grass tickled my toes as I walked. After a few minutes I took off my sandals. Sev would have a tantrum if he ever found out. The last time he had gone on a tirade about the dangers of walking barefoot. I had promised him never to do it again, but we both knew that was a lie. I liked walking barefoot, especially here in the countryside where glass and asphalt hadn’t left their mark. Maybe I’d pick some flowers on my way back. For the moment, though, I had to get the parts.

It was an hour’s walk to the market. I could see the transport station several miles away, standing like a steel block in the middle of the field. Locals and off-worlders used it to get here so they could trade. The trader I had arranged to meet with was supposed to be at lot five—one of those closest to the station.

Lot one-one-seven, lot one-one-five...

I made my way between the stalls. Most of them were the same I’d see every season. A few had gone as far as to erect makeshift shops to save them the trouble to set up a tent every time.

Lot forty-one, lot thirty-nine...

Most of the fruit was going out of season. The prices were twice their normal rate. Another few weeks and they’d start disappearing altogether. It didn’t bother me. We had more than enough processed food to last the rainy season. Sev would complain, of course, but he always complained.

Lot five! I stopped at the edge of the market. The trader hadn’t bothered set up a tent, instead leaning against a large metal container, reading from his datapad. The moment he noticed me, he stood up.

“Elcy?” he asked.

“That’s me.” I offered a smile.

“Sorry, I was expecting someone older.” The man tilted his head. He was in his late thirties, short and pale, standing out like a snowstorm in summer. I could tell he had spent a long time in space: his muscles weren’t used to normal gravity, making him gasp for air as he spoke.

“I get that a lot.” I put my sandles on the ground and took out Sev’s credit card. “Did you come here just because of my order?”

“Nope.” He took the card and swiped it through his datapad. “Most of the stuff was sold out before you arrived. Your parts are the only thing left.” He handed me back the card and lent me the datapad so I could type in my security code. “You don’t get a lot of cargo ships here, do you?”

“We manage.” I put the card away. “There isn’t that much that we need that’s off-world.”

“Well, handle with care.” The merchant tapped the crate. “I’d offer to help you carry it, but...” he didn’t finish the sentence. We both knew what he meant. “Maybe see you in a few years.” He waved and headed for the transport station.

There were no cheap antibiotics at the market place. I was careful to check all the stalls, but the only tablets I found were so overpriced that Sev would only get annoyed with me for wasting money. Knowing him he probably already was annoyed, pacing the room, grumbling.

“Time to take you home.” I dragged the container through the market. It felt light for its size. My only regret was that I had to put my sandals back on.

As I made my way through the fields something flickered in the sky. I looked up. A shining grain of light passed above the sunset, leaving this world for another. Maybe it was the merchant I’d bought the parts from? From this distance there was no way to tell.

I felt a shiver pass through me. I used to be like that once. Even after all this time I still missed the touch of vacuum...

* * *

“How are you holding up, girl?” Cass asked. She’d been my captain for half a decade, ever since she graduated the academy. “Surviving the boredom of patrol?”

“Barely,” I responded, while performing a deep sensor scan. “I still don’t approve of you bringing your family along.”

“Command gave the okay. Besides, what do you care? After this flight I’ll be transferred off and you’ll get a new replacement to annoy.”

I shut off all the lights on the bridge. Cass only laughed. She knew my tricks, just as she knew I wasn’t being serious. When she was first assigned to me I couldn’t stand her. She was a bratty cadet fresh from the academy that didn’t know up from down, while I had been called from the frontlines so full of holes that asteroids could float through two of my decks. My previous captain had survived along with the majority of the crew, but in light of the catastrophic event he had put in a request that I be reassigned to patrol duty. I had appealed, but it hadn’t made a difference. The opinion of a ship is rarely taken into consideration.

“Don’t tell me you’re getting soft on me.” Cass switched on the lights manually.

“Of course not,” I protested. “I’m worried about the civilians. I don’t want them to suffer because of your decisions.”

“Heh. I bet you don’t want them scurrying through your decks.”

That wasn’t entirely untrue. I didn’t like to have civilians in me. No battle cruisers did.

“Thanks, though.” Cass patted her control panel. “It means a lot coming from you.”

“Now who’s getting soft?”

“Do you think about it? Getting decommissioned, I mean. Humans are easy—most of us don’t get more than one tour in space. You stay on.”

“They call us space ships for a reason.”

“I know, but is it worth it? You’ve been through two decades of wars, nearly got destroyed twice, had more captains than I’ve had boyfriends... don’t you think it’s time to retire?”

Cass had no idea what she was talking about, and how could she? She was human, more different than the patrol ships I had been forced to serve with. War and void for her were reduced to pictures on a screen.

“I like the touch of vacuum,” I evaded the question. There was no point in getting her upset on her last day. “Are we good to jump to the next waypoint?”

“Can’t wait to get rid of me, can you?” Cass performed a manual deep space scan. Security protocols required that both ship and captain did the scan of each zone before moving on. “All seems good. Ready for jump?”

“Very funny.” Only she could initiate the jump, and still she’d ask me every time. It was as if she was trying to establish something deeper than the standard captain-ship partnership. Cute, but useless. In a few hours she’d be gone and I’d have to restart the cycle with some other newbie from the academy.

“Here we go.”

A single tap of the button and reality twisted around me to infinity. A split second later my hull exploded. My internal sensors showed Cass getting thrown out of her chair, as I went into full diagnostic mode. Life support, structural integrity, and system stability were checked and rechecked. Fortunately they were in the green. Long-range scanners weren’t. I immediately launched all physical and AI countermeasures, while my subsystems assessed the damage.

“Sev.” I heard Cass groan as the medbots surrounded her. The impact had cracked two of her ribs.

“Don’t speak, your family is fine,” I lied. A large part of my internal sensors were unreliable, preventing me from knowing for certain. “And don’t move. You might have complications.”

“What happened?”

“Mines.” I tried to send out a distress call, but couldn’t get a signal out. The mines were probably equipped with jamming technology. According to my short range scans there were eighty seven of them, scattered all throughout the jump zone. “Standard territory grab. The Union wants to claim the system by cutting off our jump routes. I don’t think the ship that left them is here, though.” If it were I’d be dead or boarded by now. “They’re also jamming us.”

“Fun,” Cass said through her teeth. The painkillers the bots had injected her with hadn’t kicked in yet. “What are our chances?”

“For me, zero.” I didn’t have to go through the numbers. Neither side took ships prisoner. “For you, depends if you’re still onboard when they take me down.” I paused for a few moments. I had always expected I’d be the one to die in battle, while she’d enjoy retirement surrounded by her children and grandchildren. The universe had a nasty habit of mocking us all.

I ordered the medbots to sedate Cass. I knew that if panic hadn’t set in yet, it soon would, especially when she found out what I was about to do. Humans always claimed that they were the ones to act based on personal goals and desires. I too had goals...

* * *

The spaceship vanished in the evening sky. I gazed on a few minutes more.

I didn’t exactly achieve my goals. Taking a gamble I had rammed through as many mines as necessary to open a hole in the jamming grid. I had then sent a signal to command warning them if the situation. My actions had earned me praise, the chance of instant reinstatement to the battle fleet, yet I refused. The incident had left Cass psychologically crippled and her husband dead.

The sun sunk beneath the horizon. Sev was probably pale with concern right now, as he was each time I was away for too long. Grabbing the container, I hurried through the field.

Sev was waiting in front of the house as I arrived. The moment he saw me, he turned around and slowly started making his way inside.

“Sorry I was late.” I left the container in the yard. “I saw a ship flying away so I thought I’d look at it for a bit.”

“Bah!” Sev grumbled as he sat in his armchair.

“I got the parts. No antibiotics, though. I’ll try to get some cheap ones tomorrow.”

“Heh. Antibiotics, who needs them?” Sev grabbed the paper. “That ship... was it anyone you knew?”

“Getting soft in your old age?” I laughed on my way to the kitchen. “It was just some ship. I didn’t get to see it up close. You just read your paper and I’ll get dinner ready. Okay?”

“Let’s hope I don’t starve by then!” He turned the page. “And don’t undercook it this time!”

“I wouldn’t dare.” I grabbed a can from the cupboard.

After all, I promised Cass I’d always take care of you.

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NineEpicTales @NineEpicTales ago

Interesting concept! I’m excited to see where it goes.

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SJ Reaver @SJ Reaver ago

“a lot cargo ships” -> a lot of cargo ships

“Cass getting throw out” -> Cass getting thrown out

“I kmew that if panic” -> I knew that if panic


Sev.” I heard Cass groan as the medbots surrounded her. The impact had cracked two of her ribs.

I think you mean 'Elcy'.

bubbleduck @bubbleduck ago

You seem afraid to use the word "said". It's far less harmful than it feels when writing - in fact the opposite is true. There are some guides out there about how to manipulate speech tags if you or your proofreaders wanted to look for them.

Other than that, I'm enjoying it. I don't like AI of this kind much but Elcy is a good character regardless of my preferences. The premise is very interesting, although little action or complication has come in yet.

Your attention to detail and imagery are also strong, something which I admire in a sci-fi work and strive to achieve myself. Just some examples, taken from a small section of text: "standing out like a snowstorm in summer". "his muscles weren’t used to normal gravity, making him gasp for air as he spoke." The age difference between the two is another good one.

Then there are some things I'm not sure you thought about or not. Sev reading from a paper instead of something electronic, for example. Perhaps due to a lack of power or spare parts.

Oh, and I added you to this list.

    Lise Eclaire

    Lise Eclaire @Lise Eclaire ago

    Thank you! :) I’m never sure about saidisms O:) Most often I just play it by ear (which means I’m a bit afraid of repeating it a lot). I also make lots of mistakes in my drafts O:)

    Sev prefers paper because he likes the touch (he grew up on a new colonized world mostly). It’s sort of the same reason he prefers cooked food and never got an android:)

    Very Happy Thanks so much for adding to your list! I hope you continue enjoying as things develop :)

      bubbleduck @bubbleduck ago

      Wow, do you like your emoticons/smilies.

      It's always good to have an author's forethought or consideration proven to me. Although it seems you may know this based on your writing so far, it's better for that sort of information to not be included in the story straight away and instead introduced later or hinted at over time. Keep the audience thinking about what's going on.

      Lise Eclaire

      Lise Eclaire @Lise Eclaire ago

      I’m not used to the automatic conversion. Smilies aren’t as noticeable in text : )

hazelnutbrew @hazelnutbrew ago

What an interesting concept! I'm supposing that these are anthropomorphized battle ships in space and whatnot? I'm not sure if I read that correclty, but if I interpreted correctly, that is pretty neat. LOL. Prose is engaging and the charater interactions are spot on. This is definitely a polished piece and ti shows in your stellar (heh, get it? Stellar! BRICK'D-) storytelling. This was a delight to read, of course, and the characters have promise! Also this just might be my yuri goggles, but I sense something interesting with Cass and Elcy. Teehee. But in all seriousness, I liked this story and my favorite part was probably the worldbuilding elements that were slowly slipped in through the narrative and it makes me curious ot know more about it! All this talk of ships, and it looks like my wish was granted. Haha. Good show!

archerbob @archerbob ago

Thanks for the chapter and I think this "The incident had left Cass psychologically crippled and her husband dead." could use a little more detail as it could be taken as "the husband died in the initial jump causing Cass to blame herself for his death leaving he psychologically crippled" all the way to "the husband died from the damage trying to get through the jamming and Cass was psychologically crippled from the sedatives and the knowledge the her ship killed her husband". There are plenty of other variations but these give the biggest contrast in the emotional state of the mc when they made there promise.

    Lise Eclaire

    Lise Eclaire @Lise Eclaire ago

    :) Thanks! I see your though.

    I’ll see how to tackle this. A number of flashbacks are left a bit vague to allow to other linked flashbacks. (Yes, linked flashbacks are a thing :)) So, it’s not always possible to clarify elements O:)

NeonGreenTiger @NeonGreenTiger ago

Excellent start! I'm really excited to see where this goes!

Wise old penguin @Wise old penguin ago

Would've been funny if a scif-AI got Isekai-ed


Killashard @Killashard ago

Thanks for the chapter!

jfw01 @jfw01 ago

Hello Lise,

I've read to the end of this book, and like it.

You commented at the end that there would be no more updates. I'm testing whether that means no more chapters, or whether you're closed for spelling and grammar feedback.

Because I'm like that, there's probably going to be a lot of small items, so I'm putting the first batch (to the end of this page) into a spoiler.


Grammar nitpicking:

    Lise Eclaire

    Lise Eclaire @Lise Eclaire ago

    Very Happy Hello!

    Huge thanks, and I’m glad you enjoyed :)

    What I meant by no further updates is that Book 2 will be its own separate entity and nit continue in this body. I have been fixing a few things in chapters here and there (just mistakes, no changes of meaning or new events). :)

    Thanks for the corrections :) You can Mail me on RR or put them as you have at the end of the chapter :) both are perfectly okay, and I’ll try to get to fixing things ASAP