Conquer Everything

by Hizaru

Original HIATUS Drama Romance Satire Harem Male Lead School Life Slice of Life Sports Strategy
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An ex-chubby guy tries to sit at the throne of his highschool's life

 

 

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kingleo8
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After reading the whole volume 1, I think that the author improved himself from his first chapter to the end of the volume. I just hope that authorities don't make him rewrite everything because the work closely resembles 'Masamune-kun's Revenge'.

The story is very close to reality and the mc is smart. He uses his head to think about the situation he is in. Many things happen in the story because of a given reason not because of the mc's luck. Though the case of 'be my boyfriend' is an exception to all this and I hope that the author can make a reasonable explanation about it.

Another problem I found that chapter starts with new settings. I meant to say that the previous chapter end abruptly and the next one fails to convince(me) the reader that it was logical.

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(This problem is taken care of in the newest chapter though) 

The story is good but character lack depth to them except the Mc. This is not surprising though because they are not given sufficient time in the novel for readers(me) to actually understand them.

Well, that was all so 3 and a half stars and I might also edit it if the author improves.