Light is suppose to be weak

by BigFan300

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shiro is a younge boy who dreams to become a wizard but is stuck with the weakest element of light, how will he transform the weakest element into the strongest

this is my first fanfic so I would appreciate any help with spelling errors and ways to improve my writing, i don't know what times I will release because I am really busy

also please comment so I know people are reading so I will right more

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