An old, banished alchemist finds himself conducting an experiment of the most taboo kind - creating life. A ritual has been laid, the stone golem placed, and all the ingredients and magic spells prepared. The alchemist was sure of his success, but even with a lifetime of scouring he had not prepared enough. Minutes into the experiment, his soul was damned, as the ritual accidentally sealed his very essence into the stone golem.
For thousands of years he laid fusing with the golem. The old era has passed, and a new age has ushered in. Great powers, monstrous beasts, and plotting giants seek to claim this era as their own.
Then he wakes.
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i dont know what to say rly... you can read this story just by the blue boxes... they tell everything and you can gues the rest...
feels like the author spend way to long on the blue boxes than the texts so the chapters are short and well meh..
still ok read tho
We've seen all sorts of rebirth stories, but this one has intrigued us more than most. We have based soley on the 8 chapters currently available decided to give this 4 stars. There is currently not much going on, but plenty that is hinted to come later. We have found little to no issues with the grammar, but it may be too early to tell. Our conclusion is that although this story is slightly lacking there is a solid basis/room for it to grow. We look forward to the continual growth of the author!
Really liked the idea- more so because I had one that was quite similar. The story is well-executed so far. Looking forward to more!
this is awesome and i just thought you should know.
I want to eat my sushi leave me alone.
The premise is interesting and the author seems like a smart so I doubt he will screw it up and if he does he seems like somone who would learn from his mistakes so give it a shot.
I would put in commas but I got sushi to eat.