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Who said that Death is the end? What if there was more?What if you died and were reborn? What if you had the power to create?
Would you build labyrinths filled with death traps and legions of horrors? Or would you raise a grand city the likes no one has seen? Or perhaps you've thought of something else entirely?
You see, I just want to live and let live since it didn't really work out last time. Maybe have a few close friends that I trust. Boring huh. Well, I've got to get that far first.


This is my first attempt at writing a story so please be patient with me.
So, Tags. At the moment I'm just checking boxes so I don' get caught out, hopefully I can change them if need be.

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Lodurr
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It's a good beginning I like the detail you put in but the chapters can be a little bit short, it's better I think to give large chapters even if you put them out less often.

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