Once a Soldier Always a Soldier

Once a Soldier Always a Soldier

by HoundofGod

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  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

He has been in the United States Army for years. When finally closing in on the end of his service he suffers a curveball straight to the family jewels from life itself, causing his world to be twisted upside down. He's been brought back, only to change this world somehow. For better or for worse. Through war or binding peace. He's been given no limit to his growth, hell he's not even human, though he sure looks like it. So what's he to do? Indulge in his desires and greed? Save some pathetic princess? What's he to make of this second coming?

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One of the most detailed and beautiful story in my opinion

The attention to detail is very good.

You can easily imagine the scenes where our MC tear at his prey with flesh and blood dripping from his jaw.

Character development is ok. You can understand his personality quite easily.

grammar is no question ask since the author is a native English speaker. Aside from a few typos which is acceptable.

Overall this is very interesting to read. I'm waiting for more Chief!