Threadbare

When I started reading I just could not get my bearings. How could such a good story pawsibly be so bearied in the rankings when so many teddy-ous stories make their way to the top?

It's unbearable.

I think prospective readers should paws, maybe bearicade their doors, and get comfy. I could go on but I don't want to embearass myself.

Never really knew I wanted to read about a teddy bear until this. Seriously, you've got goblins, sneks, doggos and all sorts running around in litRPG nowadays, but you wouldn't think the adventures of a teddy bear that isn't some reincarnated human would be so readable.

This is (so far) a fun little read, I can only wish to see a teddy that's kicking ads and taking cuddles!!  . I hope that this has a long life as I'm quite taken with the cuddly little murderer.

I absolutely love this story. It's charming, it flows, and I absolutely have to know what happens next. It is the one and only story that I've added to my favorites.

Style -  It's a well thought LitRPG, that integrates the LitRPG elements well with the story.

Story - I'm writing this at the end of the firat arc, so I haven't seen where it's going. However, I'm rarely so heartbroken to catch up to as I have been with this one.

Grammar - Pretty much perfect. The occasional typo, but otherwise consistant.

Character - It has several major characters that are all wonderfully complete, and also very distinct. The minor characters are not as easy to remember or sympathize with, but they work well with the main ones.

This a great addition to the LitRPG genre. It's funny, lighthearted (but there are suggestions of things much darker in the stories future) and the game mechanics don't seem to be weighing down the story - yet. The story so far has been great.

A fun, well-written story with excellent world building. The system and the resulting world just make sense and you can see how things would work that way. If you're looking for an OP protagonist or amazingly rapid scaling this isn't the story for you. Our protagonist is a golem made from a Teddy Bear and the enemies faced are of an equally low standard. But if you ever wanted to read a story with a dungeon based entirely on Cat puns or cheer for a housecat and a sentient Teddy Bear as they overcome their differences to face a common foe (rats) as fellow warriors, then this is the fic for you.

Welcome to Paddington Bear goes to Murder Town. The quaint story of an innocent and hardworking child and her curious little fluffy bloody bear unfeeling killing machine of a best friend.

It's got a good initial flow as the MC takes his first stumbling steps of life on the path to OP. Please give it the first three story arcs to ramp up. As the author starts introducing systems it just gets funnier and funnier.

If you ever wanted a cuddly version of Boxxy T. Morningwood from "Everybody Loves Large Chests" or Blacknail from "The Iron Teeth", then you're really going to love this one.

I have been reading on rrl for the better part of a year and this book made me get an account 

Nice MC, solid writing, interesting premise and world development. A bit too heavy on exposition and the human falls flat at times.

First off, I want to say that I enjoy(ed) this story. It's definitely better than most on this site, though whether it deserves the no. 1 spot is debatable. Personally, I think it had the potential to be a lot better than it currently is. This is less of a review and more of a rant, so sorry about that.

The presence of soulstones is, in my opinion, the biggest problem in the story. It just makes all fights fall flat and sucks out all the built-up tension. I mean, come on, Celia dies at the very end of a chapter (so there is at least an attempt to make the scene dramatic) and she gets put in a soulstone five lines into the next chapter. It just makes the reader think, "What was the point of that then?" At least have some lasting consequence for being put back into a soulstone, like memory loss or soul deterioration, so it can only be done a certain number of times/each death cripples them further. 

My next issue is the 2d characterisation. Almost everyone in the story can be classified as good or bad, with very little in-between. I think the first character that I saw had differening motives was the King in Chapter 48. Other than that, everyone seemed rather bland. To be fair, I can't really remember the earlier chapters as well so I'm mainly going off of how I feel about the characters at the moment, so this is probably a little inaccurate.

Another problem is how friendly and accepting everyone is. Garon decides to forgive someone who physically and mentally abused him in about 5 minutes because "She was just doing what came naturally". Really? And then there's no lasting discomfort between the two? Plus, when Celia's doing her test to see whether she can go with the army, she lets loose an actual terrorist, and the King's reaction is "Eh, we'll get him later. Love you!" Mordecai has not only killed the King's men before but will likely have the opportunity now again, but the King seems entirely unfazed. Even if he can be hunted down immediately, that would still require high-levelled individuals to waste time finding him. Either way, I think it's a little odd that Celia gets off of effective treason by just saying "No rules :)" 

Maybe I'm just being thick and not getting the light atmosphere at all, but I feel that certain elements of this story are just too incongruous for it to really work as well as it could.