Threadbare

When I started reading I just could not get my bearings. How could such a good story pawsibly be so bearied in the rankings when so many teddy-ous stories make their way to the top?

It's unbearable.

I think prospective readers should paws, maybe bearicade their doors, and get comfy. I could go on but I don't want to embearass myself.

Never really knew I wanted to read about a teddy bear until this. Seriously, you've got goblins, sneks, doggos and all sorts running around in litRPG nowadays, but you wouldn't think the adventures of a teddy bear that isn't some reincarnated human would be so readable.

I absolutely love this story. It's charming, it flows, and I absolutely have to know what happens next. It is the one and only story that I've added to my favorites.

Style -  It's a well thought LitRPG, that integrates the LitRPG elements well with the story.

Story - I'm writing this at the end of the firat arc, so I haven't seen where it's going. However, I'm rarely so heartbroken to catch up to as I have been with this one.

Grammar - Pretty much perfect. The occasional typo, but otherwise consistant.

Character - It has several major characters that are all wonderfully complete, and also very distinct. The minor characters are not as easy to remember or sympathize with, but they work well with the main ones.

This is (so far) a fun little read, I can only wish to see a teddy that's kicking ads and taking cuddles!!  . I hope that this has a long life as I'm quite taken with the cuddly little murderer.

This a great addition to the LitRPG genre. It's funny, lighthearted (but there are suggestions of things much darker in the stories future) and the game mechanics don't seem to be weighing down the story - yet. The story so far has been great.

This story is in one word, a Masterpiece. I have yet to meet another story on RRl, hell, even in general fiction, that can tell such a powerful tale. What starts as a charming tale through the eyes of an animated teddybear, slowly builds into a desperate fight to save the country. 

Lost Demiurge is in his element here, with unique characters, outstanding backstories, interesting mythos, powerrful, heart-wrenching moments and nigh-perfect grammar. I only recently picked up this wonderful story, but found myself entranced by it. And coming from me, that's saying A LOT. i reccomend this story to ALL fantasy fans, no matter which genre you like. THIS is a masterpiece, and i can't wait for more.

Welcome to Paddington Bear goes to Murder Town. The quaint story of an innocent and hardworking child and her curious little fluffy bloody bear unfeeling killing machine of a best friend.

It's got a good initial flow as the MC takes his first stumbling steps of life on the path to OP. Please give it the first three story arcs to ramp up. As the author starts introducing systems it just gets funnier and funnier.

If you ever wanted a cuddly version of Boxxy T. Morningwood from "Everybody Loves Large Chests" or Blacknail from "The Iron Teeth", then you're really going to love this one.

I have been reading on rrl for the better part of a year and this book made me get an account 

A fun, well-written story with excellent world building. The system and the resulting world just make sense and you can see how things would work that way. If you're looking for an OP protagonist or amazingly rapid scaling this isn't the story for you. Our protagonist is a golem made from a Teddy Bear and the enemies faced are of an equally low standard. But if you ever wanted to read a story with a dungeon based entirely on Cat puns or cheer for a housecat and a sentient Teddy Bear as they overcome their differences to face a common foe (rats) as fellow warriors, then this is the fic for you.

Every mini-arc after the main twist was easy to predict and the ending became very painfully obvious by the reunion. Read the first part nof any mini arc and you can know the ending by making very few logical leaps and knowing the story will turn out well.

I predicted almost 90% of the endin by the first chapter of the dwarves except a few minor things, but if you just keep in mind that the story will end well, it becomes all too easy to predict the next plot points even up to the ending.

Somehow by the end it feels like Threadbare is almost a self-insert character just getting with the author's waifu (Though even by the end Cecelia felt bland compared to most of the cast), it made me just feel akward reading through the final chapters because it felt like there was an unneeded flirtation between the two. Most of the (Very little) romance in this book felt natural as if it had been there for years, but this felt completely out of place for the two.

The other meh thing in this book are most the cast of characters feel like if you replace them, the story feel like you could replace them with another character without any real change (Or just take them out entirely). It takes me out of my reading when I stop reading for a few hours (e.g. school or work) and then come back and completly forget who a charcter is and by the wrapping up chapters I had forgotten half the mentioned characters even though I read this in three days.

All in all even though this is a better story than most on the website, it definately does not deserve to be praised as highly as it is.