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When I started reading I just could not get my bearings. How could such a good story pawsibly be so bearied in the rankings when so many teddy-ous stories make their way to the top?
I think prospective readers should paws, maybe bearicade their doors, and get comfy. I could go on but I don't want to embearass myself.
Never really knew I wanted to read about a teddy bear until this. Seriously, you've got goblins, sneks, doggos and all sorts running around in litRPG nowadays, but you wouldn't think the adventures of a teddy bear that isn't some reincarnated human would be so readable.
I absolutely love this story. It's charming, it flows, and I absolutely have to know what happens next. It is the one and only story that I've added to my favorites.
Style - It's a well thought LitRPG, that integrates the LitRPG elements well with the story.
Story - I'm writing this at the end of the firat arc, so I haven't seen where it's going. However, I'm rarely so heartbroken to catch up to as I have been with this one.
Grammar - Pretty much perfect. The occasional typo, but otherwise consistant.
Character - It has several major characters that are all wonderfully complete, and also very distinct. The minor characters are not as easy to remember or sympathize with, but they work well with the main ones.
This a great addition to the LitRPG genre. It's funny, lighthearted (but there are suggestions of things much darker in the stories future) and the game mechanics don't seem to be weighing down the story - yet. The story so far has been great.
it's no wounder that the rewiews keep swinging between winie the puh, padington bear and chucky.it's just that good.
the characters are all intricate, with their own dreams and motivations, and their interactions flow naturaly. The autor knows how to do show, not tell about it all, and forshadowing is done masterfully.
The storry manages to mix existential dread, death, lost inocence with sugary overdoses of fluffy adorableness and teaparties in a complatly natural way. Becouse OFCOURSE that is what you do when the necromantic midboss threathens to evicerate your special someone. it's just polite.
a much veirder but atleast as thought out system as any. some of the weirdest baseclasses i have ever come across (i mean, the Model class as a base adventure class? come on), but they work. it's even a huge part of the story, the secrecy and worth of the knowlage about high level jobs, and their unlocks.
Normaly, you would think that when an autor that is this big on puns and references, it would get straind really fast. but no. The puns work. extreamly well, even. even when the instorry characters point them out. Gramar is fine, with the occasional small mistake. way, way better than most on the site, on par with Iron teeth.
This is awesome. I hope the author know how great it is to come across something so amazing. I think this is one of the best stories I have read on this site.
Surprisely a damn good story here. Not some disgusting cop out copy paste reincarnated person bullshit with half of every chapter being dumb stupid boring numbers and retarded skill nonsense. The primary character best of all stays within its means and character of what and who it is. This is among the EXTREME FEW non human protagonist stories out there and most important is not complete shit. Author is doing good so far and seems to have good direction and pacing aside from the later changes could have been brought out a bit later.
Synopis is actually good to btw
This story is in one word, a Masterpiece. I have yet to meet another story on RRl, hell, even in general fiction, that can tell such a powerful tale. What starts as a charming tale through the eyes of an animated teddybear, slowly builds into a desperate fight to save the country.
Lost Demiurge is in his element here, with unique characters, outstanding backstories, interesting mythos, powerrful, heart-wrenching moments and nigh-perfect grammar. I only recently picked up this wonderful story, but found myself entranced by it. And coming from me, that's saying A LOT. i reccomend this story to ALL fantasy fans, no matter which genre you like. THIS is a masterpiece, and i can't wait for more.
When I started reading this story it seemed like it was going to be another amazing story. I really loved the beginning. But unfortunately after the first "arc" it quickly tumbled into mediocrity. Just a random litrpg with a somewhat boring leveling system that is never truly explored. The only reason I was able to finish it was because of the amazing start (and to be fair, teddybears). It hooked me so hard that I couldn't stop until I learned what was the point of all this. And oh boy. I was not impressed by the plot or the characters motivations.
I read another review here that compared it to a children story. And I have to say I agree. The motivations are very black and white, and there is no real logic behind any of their actions. When I finished the book the only thing I could think was that this book should have ended before it even started. Melos actions, and most characters actions, made absolutely no sense.
The whole story is basically only working because it's written so that not a single character can see "grandma the wolf" when she is standing right in front of them. With teeth, claws and everything. They just completely ignore it. It's such an absurd level of cluelessness how these characters follow along with the craziest stuff and still thing they are doing good.
Spoilers here so be careful.
Execution without trial, check! Genocide, check! Devil summoning cultist king, check! "We are the good guys! The king just want to save this land! You are wrong for trying to stop us from killing every last man, woman and child in this town!" Melos saying he is trying to close the dungeon while at the same time doing the exact oposite. Killing the resistance fighters that wants the exact same thing. Like WAT. Absolutely nothing in this plot makes sense. This shouldn't even be a story because they should just have worked togheter and stopped everyhing before the first chapter in this story was even written. Melos problem solving ability can be compared to Threadbare from the first 5 chapters. No, for real.
I really expected more from this story after reading 5 star after 5 star review. But after the amazingly good start the story really just turns mediocre. With less than mediocre characters.
Honestly, I dont even know what I was expecting, but certainly better than this.
I enjoyed the first part of the novel, however, the second part ,
After he wakes up from hibernation
Is just average.
I dont mind reading average stories, but this story was hyped so much, I feel like I got into this with expectaions too high, and was disapointed when it failed to deliver.