Dimension Mage

by Madjic

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

This is the story of a orphan refusing to die on the streets of the city Armoss in the slums....

Hi this is my First story and im going to be taking a crack at what i hope to be a pretty great work let me know on grammer and spelling and plot holes Thanks.

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I plan for this not to hold back in terms of realness it might be offensive to some but it will contain Profanity, Rape, Violance, Drugs, Murder and honestly Etc. This is a story that i would like feedback but if it is not constructive get lost

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