The Author Of Eternity

by The Red Writer

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Tragedy Anti-Hero Lead Grimdark Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Strong Lead Summoned Hero Supernatural
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"Do you want to live forever?"

The answer to this question is usually yes, despite the seemingly endless stream of cautionary tales based off such an offer.  But really, who can say no to an offer of immortality? To never grow old, to never get sick, to never die...

Once, Evren was a man who would have easily accepted such an offer. Once, he believed that he could never grow bored of living in a world so full of life, adventure, and mystery. So when he recieved a seemingly-miraculous offer from an ancient being, he didn't hesitate to accept. 

But every deal has a price, no gift comes without strings attached, and some might say that immortality is the greatest gift of all. Not Evren, though. 

No, for Evren, immortality is naught but a curse that he desperately hopes to be rid of- No matter the cost.

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tonyinallcaps
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In love with the premise

I fell in love with the premise instantly, and just as quickly, I read the first chapter, before it was sadly taken down.

IT WAS AMAZING 

I'm just posting this to let you know how good it was. I know you're working on your other work, but know this one will be pleased if you ever get the time for this story.

With much love, me

nf_zeta
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I honestly love these sorts of stories. I've long gotten bored of the more plain power trips and its the psychological sides of having power and long life that this fiction is trying to explore.

So far the characters feel believable, both by themselves and by their interactions with each other. No major problems with grammar and the prose and story is good enough that my mind probably skipped over most of the minor ones as I can't remember more than a small few.

Tycka
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I must say I already in love with this story, it has insane Mc. He's really to my liking because he is insane. I just can't say how long I've waited for this kind of story. You should continue this, because it's great, and I'm at loss of words to describe how good it is.

Shuu
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Definitely worth a read

Alright now this is a super interesting concept of a story taken wayyyy down the road of the concept. Fricken love it.

The age old mc is basically immortal shows the actual result of a mc who is actually immortal. Besides the fact that you could make a whole bunch of short story’s of the mc past, the mc is a breath of fresh air. Why is it the story’s that start out amazeing have to have such slow releases x.x

Cody Obannon
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Eternity is going to be great

So far I am in love with this book.  Once it gets to a decent amount of chapters, (lets say 100) I'll redo this review as an advanced.

Hyeon
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very interesting start, the main character really acts like someone who has seen it all im liking it alot :)

kao
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A Story of Wealth and Taste

If you get my review title, you will earn yourself some cred and get where this story is coming from.

 

Give this story a read if you're tired of litrpg, OP Teens with women issues, dungeons that don't use shackles, slimes that aren't slimy, houses that roam, and a weird randy hound that oddly isn't that randy...

 

Our MC is Immortal. Big word. Immortal. What does it mean? Endless time. Think on it, and ponder. Imagine being a teenager, 17 forever and never being treated seriously forever. Heck imagine being 40, middle age forever. Horrifying right? I suspect that's just a small glimpse of the world we're going to see in this story to come. 

 

I'm excited. I'm hoping the author gives us a great interview to read about. He plays with ideas I've had before. Now he shares his view of what it truly means to be immortal. 

My view: Great for the first 200 years. After that...ugh. Will be a slog. (Now I know why the Doctor mucks around in his Tardis all the time...keeps boredom away)

 

 

 

 

TheGreatOne
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Will leave this as encouragement

I can’t put my finger on it, but for some reason I just really like this story- a lot- and it’s only four chapters in. 

Maybe it’s the MC’s genuine actions with respect to his unique circumstances.

Maybe it’s the mystery behind said unique circumstances.

Maybe it’s just the allure of such a distinct plot and MC.

Whatever the case, let’s see how far my review will bring this story up the leaderboard(it’s a relatively new story after all).

uictoriam4
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The writing is good but heck who rates only 10k words novel in top 10.At least wait for it to reach>50k words.For now,there are just peanuts to read.(Detailed review when at least significant content is present!)

JonSnoooow
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Pretty Flawless so far, curious to see how the stakes rise with an unkillable character with pretty mental powers.