A barely literate pyromancer struggles to avoid expulsion from the prestigious Crymych School of Druidic Sorcery; but when a murderer begins hunting her more talented classmates, exams become the least of her worries. (Especially when her friends are the next to go missing.)
A Mythological Whodunnit. (completed)
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Hello Ataire. My name is GreenFlame. Nice to meet you.
I really enjoy your book as well as the contents which you so carefully woven together. The idea of another magic school other than the classical Hogwarts in modern times is a wonderful concept. As a bonus, you focused on the magic and science of Welsh Magic which had been underrated for many times.
Druids have become famous only from certain popular RPG board games, a TV show, but the true history, the knowledge, and iconic magic associated with Druidcraft or Welsh Magic has never been portrayed in its full honest glory. I am so happy to stumble upon such a beautiful gemstone of creativity!
You're writing is very comforting. I was able to read and not feel rush. I was not overloaded with too many paragraphs and you balanced the information with personal struggle.
I fell in love with poor Rhian. She's like me when I butcher the French Language in school. Sob. I would not blame her if she went 'FRODO! FRODO! I SAY FRODO SO BLOW UP ALREADY YOU SON OF A--". I hope she will survive. If she fails this first exam, the story will unfortunately end here (maybe Braith will have a spin off with her curly locks... shrug).
I admire how much time and dedication you pieced together, to make it feel like a paperback book I would love to hold in my hands. The little symbols, page breaks, and the big-A T that starts a great adventure.
I truly hope Rhian will make it to Graduation Day and become a promising Druid. She is literally the pioneering character for this line of genre. So dear Rhian, Keep Calm and Blow Up More HB 2 Pencils, with Spirit!