WTF I'm a Dungeon!? (Dropped)
by Sir Nil
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This story has been more or less dropped, read if you want to.
The mad necromancer falls defeated, in his final moments he cast a spell and broke reality. Opening a portal and allowing countless souls to enter the world.
They were reincarnated, born in new bodies and forced into a world unlike their own
A boy wakes up a prince, in a kingdom on the verge of ruin.
A girl finds herself on the cusp of madness, the voices torment her...
Another finds themselves in the ruins of a destroyed city, a wreckage of some ancient war, their body little more than bones.
This is the story of the one reborn as a dungeon.
This is my first Web Novel so there may be some mistakes if you see any or have criticisms please comment on them.
I don’t own the cover art.
If you have any questions or suggestions about the story then feel free to come over to this discord channel https://discord.gg/9PmCR8F I'm usually active and will try to answer your questions as fast as possible.
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First off all, so far I find your story quite refreshing.
I left story and character score at 3.5 for now, because it is too soon into the story to tell how those compartments will develop, but so far they are quite solid.
Other than that:
I like your personal writing style, and how you don't seem to take everything too seriously, very much.
Your grammar is sadly not quite as good. Sometimes there are some words missing or there are a few spelling or grammar mistakes. Nothing too bad, and it doesn't distract from the story, but still it is a bit sad.
Lastly I hope, that you continue write this promising start, and keep it up.
PS: if you EVER think of dropping this story due to management problems or writers block, PLEASE leave a message or a note, so we readers don't wait for something that NEVER comes.
So far so good, why waste time rewriting the whole thing when making slight changes over time would befine. well I guess we will see another chapter in 6+ months.