Our MC the creater of the most advanced AI dies in the process of merging his body with the AI system but to his surprise wakes up to find himself reincarnated into a new world,a world of cultivation. Watch our MC grow with the help with the AI system and his innate ability the immortal god soul.
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has great potential, great so far. looking forward to more chapters. one of the things that need improving though is the character names, it's a little difficult to understand who you are speaking about as u mainly don't use names for the other characters, at least so far u haven't used names for other characters. but I understand this is your first time writing and I am sure all these minor mistakes will be gone soon as u write on. anyway, great start, i think this novel has a great future.
you have returned whoop whoop cant wait for more
Honestly this is a dream come true since I read stories with AI chips and wanted to read a story like this
It has a lot of potential and if it can get a good proof reader it can definitely be considered top level
Ice buckets i need to rewrite my review ;-; oh well here it is ... The novel is okay read but the story is developing too fast in my opinion which leads to major flaws and such .Another flaw is that you write the MC name with small letters but everytime you write a name you need a Cap at the start E.G : george=Wrong George=Right ... Second mistake is that you made the MC name but you never gave him a surname or any characters in the story ... 3rd mistake is that your writing has many flaws and doesn't feel right. Maybe it's just me i just say this cause i want the author to learn and try to make his stories better after all a better story always make people more interested to reard ( maybe you can even develop your own way of writing which almost none of the books in this site have or on wattpad :P ) I'm rooting for this work to acquire a top 10 spot with other novels after all chinese styke novels are 10 times harder to write than a japanese style one because chinese novels have their own kind of style and if you are interested to make this story even better than you need to read the humongous chinese mythology (it's pretty boring but could give you some inspiration how you wanna progress the story ) I'll keep following this story hopefully it comes to a happy end ..every end is just sad in my opinion
I really like the ia system, it make me remember of 'warlock of the magic world',
Hope you finish it.
can’t wait to read more chapters. I see a great future for this novel.
Dunno if I should read past chapter 1 now or just wait for more to binge read. Great so far!
You were right about some mistakes, but then again it's fine, I think it is better for you to just keep writing and not make too many corrections, you'll make better progress. You can just fix those if you are not planning to write any chapters.
Loving all the story, the only issue is that there are issues when referring to characters and the lack of grammar kills it heavily.
Trying to understand characters with little to no naming added to them makes it hard to read and the lack of capitals with incorrect spelling makes it almost unbearable.
Despite this, feels like a fresh take on cultivation and I hope you will find a proofreader.
love it and cant wate for more chapeters
the character is using his brain so that makes me love this even more
also will you be doing patrion?