Kain, the Caveman
by drazaello
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- Profanity
Take an early hominid sponsored by the spirit of Progress, drop it on a spacefaring civilization. Prepare for hijinks to ensue.
*Dry prologue warning!*
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homem das cavernas
muito bom adoraria que estte personagem foosse invocado para o mundo de fantasia vaarios herois invocados de variadas epocas
junto de nosso heroi, homem das cavernas
seria epico
Should gain more traction.
A thoroughly enjoyable experience to read, I want to give five stars in all categories but it needs more content to judge.
His main character is very strong, His struggle with his broken soul and his inhuman morals plus thought process contrasts with the sci-fi setting. Although the side characters need work with their bland personality and little description.
The grammar is in the top percentile of this website.
One of the strong points of this fiction is status screens. It gives alot of perspective and an interesting progression of both character and strength.