The Costa Brava Scenario ( formerly: Space Opera )

by tjtf

Angie’s heart started beating again. After the betrayal, she almost wished it wouldn’t.

Angie had spent 6 years of her life getting ready for this moment, the moment the competition would start, the moment her team would prove they were the best.

Now, instead of supervising the engineering team, she needed to lead a squad of in-game players.

It would be hellish, but she would go through gaming hell to lead her team to victory in the Space Opera VR systems challenge.

 

The Costa Brava Scenario is a scifi littpg-lite story.  Peviously this story was called Space Opera and it now has a new cover too.  The title was changed 11/23

 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
PROLOGUE ago
1. THE HEARTBEAT & 2. LUNCH WITH DAD ago
* ATG 1. SYBLA ago
3. HURRICANE ANGIE ago
4. DEV CENTER BANQUET ago
5. THE DEV CENTER: THUS IT BEGINS ago
6. Gotcha and Training ago
7. T-Minus 15 ago
8. Equipment Check ago
9. Mark and the TU'COn ago
10. The Landing Bay ago
Need some opinions on title and description ago
11. First Intermission ago
12. Command Center: Intermission and Across The Galaxy: Symbla Jump 1 ago
13. T-MINUS 28 TO RESTART ago
14. Getting In The Pods ago
15. Any One You Walk Away From ago
16. Walking Point ago
17. Cache ago
18. Contact ago
19. IN THE COMMAND CENTR: COLIN AND JASMINE ago
20. XMAN'S BODY ago
21. SUGAR SPUN PROGRAMS ago
22. TUNNEL RAT ago
22. AT THE CROSS ago
23. THE DEVIL'S INN: NESSI ago
24. LOOTING THE TUNNEL ago
25. TROTTING POINT ago
26. FIREBASE ALPHA- FLANNI ago
27. FAMILY REUNION AND FIGHTING IN THE WAREHOUSE ago
28. THE DEVIL’S INN: TAVERN SLUT ago
29. FIGHTING IN THE WAREHOUSE ago
30. FIREBASE ALPHA: REFIT ago
31. FIREBASE ALPHA: BRIEFING & 32 DINNER WITH HENRY ago
33. Firebase Alpha: FIREBASE ALPHA: COFFEE OR DINNER ago
34. COMMAND CENTER: CONGRESSMAN & 35. IN THE FIELD ago
36. ADVANCE ago
37. TUNNEL HATE ago
38. LOVE PROBLEMS ago
39. ASSAULT PROCESS ago
CONVULSIVE ACTIONS ago
INSIDE THE PROCESSING PLANT ago
41. ON THE CATWALK ago
42. CARMEN ago
43. THE TALK ago
44. THE SHOT ago
45. MEDIC ago
46. WALKAWAY ago

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Space opera with spunk

I stumbled upon this story by chance. I'm not really into VR and Space themed stories. I'd rather fancy fantasy settings. This story however still managed to lure me in.

Sure. There are a lot of things that can be done better in it. Spelling mistakes are too common to be missed and grammar could be polished. Story jumps in POV hophazardly. Many characters are introduced, while only few get some sunshine. Those can be fixed with a good editor.

Characters that get some action are interesting to say the least. They all have their own quirks and faults and it is shown well. They feel alive, which is why I love to read what they do next. There is even some space for mystery (pun intended).

I urge the author to continue and improve what he can. It would be a shame to leave it unpolished.