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The League's Fleet has policed known space for millennia, backed by mighty dreadnoughts that crushed any force that opposed them.

Now, on the edge of League space, a new foe threatens the centuries-long status quo, and it's up to two outsider species - the Dreeden and their allies, the Terrans- to try and save the League before this new threat consumes it.


Please enjoy this sci-fi space battle adventure, originally written for the HFY subreddit.


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druiseeker
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This is what I was missing.  I want to read more like this!!  Please, please, please, keep on writing!

deadmaster
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Hi parad i just read your först Chalmers and i got to say. You have keep wrieting... it is really Good. And if typ have the same quality as in your other story ut till be a hit

Zoe Blue
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One of the best stories I have ever read.

 

Patrick Munter
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 I hope you continue writing this, because this is what I have been missing. 

I like how we are able to follow more story lines than just one single group like even during the battle on the Station, we got an insight in how the EVA team was doing 

WearifulSole
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This is incredible,

I would really love to see you develop this into a full length novel. I would absolutely line up to purchase this story if it were available. I love the way you describe the movements of both the characters, and their ships in space, they remind me of one of my all time favorite space simulation games, Elite Dangerous. The multiple perspectives is also enjoyable, I like being able to see what is happening at other places in the story, rather than following one narrative the whole time.


Overall, this is fantastic, and please write more :)

Knight22
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Reads like the prolog of a best seller.

This has great beginnings. I'm writing this review after reading the first two chapters and just that brief glimpse into the world of Prey makes me want to buy the entire collection. I hope you continue writing this.