Age of Gods - A VRMMO Story

by thomasdarkrose

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Slice of Life Strong Lead Supernatural Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
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Darren is just an average guy, not rich, not poor, not too fat, not too thin, just about everything regarding him is in the 'Goldilocks Zone'. He spends his leisure time playing VRMMO's, but he isn't the righteous hero or conniving villain, instead, he spends his time hunting down the rarest resources to craft the most powerful items he can. Today Karonite Industries newest VRMMO is launching and Darren is ready to play.  Join Darren in a new world on his adventures in Age of Gods!

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I had previously started writing this story but became dissatisfied because of my lack of experience. Now, Age of Gods is relaunching with the same premise but many many changes. I hope you will all enjoy this journey with me!

(Just a quick note, any reviews dated before 12/10/2018 are for the previous version of this story.)

I did not make the cover if the owner of the art wants me to take the image down please just send me a message and I will comply immediately.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Vol. 1 - Entering the Game - Prologue ago
Vol. 1 - Entering the Game - Chapter 1 ago
Vol. 1 - Entering the Game - Chapter 2 ago
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Vol. 1 - Entering the Game - Chapter 11 ago
Vol. 1 - Entering the Game - Chapter 12 ago
Vol. 1 - Entering the Game - Chapter 13 ago
Vol. 1 - Entering the Game - Epilogue ago
Vol. 2 - The Grind - Prologue ago
Vol. 2 - The Grind - Chapter 1 ago
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Vol. 2 - The Grind - Chapter 3 ago
Vol. 2 - The Grind - Chapter 4 ago
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Vol. 3 - Education - Chapter 1 ago
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Vol. 4 - Growth - Prologue ago
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Vol. 6 - Captivity - Prologue ago
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Andross Guile
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Grinding and nothing else

You know what this story needs? Plot. It needs to have a plot. The MC is grinding for the hell of it with no rhyme or reason. There is no agency except for, I want to do it for fun. I at first enjoyed the crafting quests but I'm 600 pages in and nothing of note has happened. 

I don't want a random calamity but just spice things up a little! This is drier than Death Valley!

 

 

dm xanadu
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I only got two chapters into it. The grammar isn't great, but whatever, it's a free RR story and I could read it. There were so many glaring errors that I couldn't read any further.

The main character is boring, his life story is literally: "I have nothing. No friends, no family, no job, nothing that ties me strongly to anything." He is described as being a 'master crafter' that the company asked for help to develop the crafting system in their game years before. But doesn't talk about any of the games he played or why he left, or what he did that made him good.

Then they introduce the game, which had a media blackout concerning it's release. Still it manages to sell preorders. Based on... what? There is no other mention of anything else the company has done, just, "Hey, new game. Super expensive. We can't tell you anything about it." When he does get into the game, rather than some sort of content hook, a cinematic or anything of the sort, he gets a warning that he will be permanently banned if he purposefully, indirectly or accidentally tells the NPCs that they are NPCs. Right there, the game is done. They will lose all their player base within a week. 

There might be some good content later on when he actually gets into the game, but with so flawed a foundation I can't imagine this book being worth reading in it's current form. 

jacobpaige
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Boring, shallow and selfabsorbed

I made it to v3c9. I'm not sure how though when there simply was no reason to read passed the second chapter. There is only one character in this story, and he's not very interesting. There is no challenge or tension in anything that happens. Everything is basically handed to the MC on a silver platter without him having to do much to get it. And while almost every chapter focuses on him crafting, it all feels shallow and boring. We're never given a reason to care about the crafting, or anything else for that matter. I don't know why I wasted so much time on this story, but you shouldn't.

Zedicous
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The start to what I hope will be a massive story.

The story to this point is both intreging and we'll thought out, with the MC having a very distinct personality and goals. I enjoy the fact that the MC doesn't always do the obvious (to the reader) but has his own personality and preference on how to do things. 

I also enjoy the fact that when he can, he chooses to put in his own effort and time to complete a task instead of spamming his ability, but is still willing to use his ability when he needs to.

Futhark the Elder
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RRL has few stories in which one can simply immerse oneself without periodic screeches of dismay from the inner grammar nazi. To the reader’s delight, Age of Gods is high quality writing both technically and in storytelling flair.

For a change, the protagonist is not doing the hero thing and saving the world from demons, for which mercy we should all give the author a round of applause. Quite fresh, too, is the emphasis on crafting details, adding depth one seldom encounters in the typical litrpg fare.

I rate this story right up there, together with my favourites (for example, Arcane Emperor), although the style is quite different, the pace somewhat slower, and the focus of attention on crafting rather than spells. The story is well thought out and the details mesh smoothly. This tells us we’re dealing with a rarely-talented author.

Drake19
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Nice story, must read

One of the best mmirog novels in this site. Especially since there are so few crafting types, it is nice to see a little behind the scene of all the battle and glory 

Mike33k
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Can’t get enough crafting love it

Vrmmorpg and crafting with lots of stats and blue windows! More please!

Chaos_Seed
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A Refreshing Take on This Genre

First off, very glad that you did not give up on this story. I had not read it previously, but if you hadn't began again I never would have! 

For the review, in general this story flows really well. I enjoyed all the little repetitive missions that he had to do at the beginning. JUST when you thought that the crotchety old man would FINALLY take him on as an apprentice, he sent our MC on another mission. 

For grammar, there were only a few instances where I noticed simple mistakes. 

Generally "Story" and "Style" run together with me. You need good style to make the story read well, and so on. The idea of banning people for mentioning "NPCs" or "Players" was a nice little idea. Also, the entire take on the whole "Crafter player" genre was really nice. At first when he was trying to become a magitech engineer I was worried, but that worry was cleared when he learned all the other skills for it as well. 

The characters have great detail so far. The whole idea about the NPC's having their own AI's made this much easier to enjoy. 

I wish you luck on future reading, and I will be favoriting this all the way!

stetyson
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Crafting with fighting and magic.

Great crafting systems. Interesting and in depth magic. Wonderfully written!

docsumac
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Quick Take: Remember Jack of None, Master of All? Better than that, because the main character ISN'T a crippled magic sex goblin, which is a huge step up.  

Worst thing I can say about this story so far is the tense tends to drift back and forth between present and past, mainly in the early chapters.  The spelling is 99%, just the occasional typo that basic spellcheck would miss.

As for the actual story, it's a heavy detail craft story. Half a chapter is devoted to manufacturing a single item. If that is good or bad is a matter of personal taste.