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Kings bicker, nobles squabble and kingdoms war with one another. The age of heroes ended long ago, now is the age of decline when men with more entitlement than skill wage war for the smallest of slights. When adventrers roam deep into the wild places of the earth trying desperately to bring back the glory days of their trade, where a woman can't hope to walk alone and stay unmolested, where the strong eat the weak.

But in the plains of Belador one individual knowns this cycle of strong eat weak far to well.

And he is hungry.

Author Note: I found the cover on pintrest, if the creator wants me to take it down I shall

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Khagan of Belador

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sincron
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darn good so far

seems like a monster story where the monster is a actual monster

very early days but if the author stays the course and keeps working on this it could turn into a top rated story 

Chayim
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Violence is a powerful thing. 

It can terrify, shock, or even inspire but in this story violence bores.

That dullness combined with the lack of interesting or relatable characters, an unremarkable setting, and a flat plot leaves me with no desire to continue or recommend this.

Maybe I'm being too harsh but I have read too many stories with the exact same premise as this that do a better job.

Haeru
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Read half a chapter and felt obligated to leave a review. Been looking for this sort of novel where author doesnt hold back or try to put human moral values onto a monster. Please keep the monster as a monster

disastermaster
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The first few chapters are really good 

They paint an intresting picture of the World and awaken the desire to learn more about it

I am looking forward to Future updates

Lord Joyde
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Garrosh Hellscream The Rapist

And here I thought I had an ego...

Uhm.

Style- nothing new, nothing bad, nothing worth more than 3 stars.

Story- uhh... its actually a decent read, but the Author's ego, even if most of the AU's are meant as an obvious joke, is just horribly disgusting.. maybe disgusting isn't the proper word to use here but I think you get the point.

Grammar- Didn't really find any big mistakes which made me want to stop reading or awakened my inner grammar nazi. That said, there are a few minor mistakes here and there.

Character- Heavily inspired by Garrosh Hellscream.

I fucking hate Garrosh Hellscream. 1 star it is.

Otherwise, non-WoW players might find him... okay.

Lorcogoth
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Brutality and Savagery at its finest

really good start, you immediatly get a good feel for the Orc culture and the driving forces behind it.

greatly advised you try this story if you like something a little more violent.

Reversity
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Main character as of 2nd arc becomes slave

The book before that point is great, i dropped it after because i don't like my MC to be a slave.

Maybe in the future if he ever stops being a slave again ill read it again. 

 

_-Paris-_
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Good story , interesting to read , great grammar . But it got dropped , why ??