Louie and Joe and the forcefield

Louie and Joe and the forcefield

by KayKay.N

Dr Boris is making an earth bomb to explode everyone on earth he also made a forcefield  blaster so he can make a forcefield around earth what's going to happen next find out in the story

 

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