The Gamer - One Piece

by Labello

Fan Fiction HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy LitRPG Male Lead Reincarnation Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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Ever since finishing school, Ashida only reads the manga "One Piece" or plays video games.

One day, in the middle of an important game tournament, Ashida has a heart attack, and dies. When he opens his eyes, there is a blue screen floating in front of him, and he finds himself in the One Piece world.

 

Disclaimer: I do not own One Piece or anything mentioned in this story from the original manga.

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Nepuko
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Very Promising. Hope you keep up!

 This is good. I don't really like One Piece but fanfics like these make me like it ( still don't like one piece but like very much one piece fanfics). Some reasons as to why I like it :

  • I am a simple man. I see a transmigration+reincarnation in another world ( aka isekai type story ). I am interested.
  • That world is a manga I know of, and quite popular + one I enjoyed ( a long time ago )
  •  MC has a system? Bookmarked
  •  MC's power (system) is interesting. I see that it's also heavily inspired by The Gamer's ability. I like how his system dosen't only focus on..One piece-ish powers (Quick reflexes, detect bloodlust, etc.)
  •  System is nice ( Talking about G ). I don't know if he has hidden motives or he's really friendly, but it's a change from neutral System or (somewhat) evil system. Also like these features it has. Great job author ( good imagination and originality )
  •  Jewelry Bonney is a kid, so Luffy is a kid too. I like how he transmigrated before Luffy began his adventure ( Heck he even met Shanks before the latter met Luffy :D)
  • Characters ( kinda ) well fleshed out. I still don't see problems with it so I gave a 5 star rating.
LuciferMorningstar666
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A great read, plus I really wanna see how Ashida will evolve to a strong fighter with Shanks as Mentor. So keep on going😁

Azkan
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  • Good so far 
  • Keep it up
uictoriam4
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Writing is good with few grammatical mistakes.Maybe you could give some background info relating to the parts of one piece world as needed to increase readership.Too few written chapters for a more detailed review

MAD CRUX
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I like One Piece as well as The Gamer and I never would of thought that a combination of the two would be so good and not only that you have added your own flare to it as well since I am pretty sure The Gamer didn't have a shop feature or the system assistant.

Tokarev
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Love the story so far I like the relationship forming between MC and Bonney hopeing for more thanks for the chapters

King_of_Deuces
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One of the best anime reincarnation novels yet. Keep it up! 

Ghostmanone
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Way to go cant wait for more

so far so good with great potential I love these kinds of stories 

Lubabpaul
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Please continue to update!!!! Great story! Just the type of story I've been looking for!!!! 

geyazen
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I like the style of the story but the meeting with

Bonney & Shanks it goes fast with the 2 main characters
of the main story... I have a question: Is Ashida recruited in Shanks'crew? do not mind if my point of view is not constructiveembarassed

thank's for this good story
and we are waiting
for more chapter