Ever since finishing school, Ashida only reads the manga "One Piece" or plays video games.
One day, in the middle of an important game tournament, Ashida has a heart attack, and dies. When he opens his eyes, there is a blue screen floating in front of him, and he finds himself in the One Piece world.
Disclaimer: I do not own One Piece or anything mentioned in this story from the original manga.
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This is good. I don't really like One Piece but fanfics like these make me like it ( still don't like one piece but like very much one piece fanfics). Some reasons as to why I like it :
- I am a simple man. I see a transmigration+reincarnation in another world ( aka isekai type story ). I am interested.
- That world is a manga I know of, and quite popular + one I enjoyed ( a long time ago )
- MC has a system? Bookmarked
- MC's power (system) is interesting. I see that it's also heavily inspired by The Gamer's ability. I like how his system dosen't only focus on..One piece-ish powers (Quick reflexes, detect bloodlust, etc.)
- System is nice ( Talking about G ). I don't know if he has hidden motives or he's really friendly, but it's a change from neutral System or (somewhat) evil system. Also like these features it has. Great job author ( good imagination and originality )
- Jewelry Bonney is a kid, so Luffy is a kid too. I like how he transmigrated before Luffy began his adventure ( Heck he even met Shanks before the latter met Luffy :D)
- Characters ( kinda ) well fleshed out. I still don't see problems with it so I gave a 5 star rating.
A great read, plus I really wanna see how Ashida will evolve to a strong fighter with Shanks as Mentor. So keep on going😁
- Good so far
- Keep it up
Writing is good with few grammatical mistakes.Maybe you could give some background info relating to the parts of one piece world as needed to increase readership.Too few written chapters for a more detailed review
I like One Piece as well as The Gamer and I never would of thought that a combination of the two would be so good and not only that you have added your own flare to it as well since I am pretty sure The Gamer didn't have a shop feature or the system assistant.
Love the story so far I like the relationship forming between MC and Bonney hopeing for more thanks for the chapters
One of the best anime reincarnation novels yet. Keep it up!
so far so good with great potential I love these kinds of stories
Please continue to update!!!! Great story! Just the type of story I've been looking for!!!!
I like the style of the story but the meeting with
Bonney & Shanks it goes fast with the 2 main characters
of the main story... I have a question: Is Ashida recruited in Shanks'crew? do not mind if my point of view is not constructive
thank's for this good story and we are waiting
for more chapter