Death's Heir

by Kymani

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

"The body is but a vessel for the soul, a puppet which bends to the soul's tyranny."

Death is not the end but merely the beginning.......

 

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Azreal is brought to a new world upon his death, a world of gods but he later finds out that this was the home he left seventeen years ago

Unknown to him, when he met his grandfather he was set on the path to becoming one of the strongest gods.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 0: Prologue ago
Chapter 1: Meeting ago
Chapter 2: Letting Go ago
Chapter 3: Reborn ago
Chapter 4: Maseru ago
Chapter 5: Waking up ago
Chapter 6: Questions & Answers (1) ago
Chapter 7 : Questions & Answers (2) ago
Chapter 8: Parting ago
Chapter 9: Snow Region ago
Chapter 10: Shahiem ago
Chapter 11: Momento ago
Chapter 12: One Month ago
Chapter 13: Gaza City ago
Chapter 14: Humble Lions ago
Chapter 15: Direwolves (1) ago
Chapter 16 : Direwolves (2) ago
Chapter 17 : Sleepless Night ago
Chapter 18 : Space Ring ago
Chapter 19 : Purple Inferno ago
Chapter 20 : The Teacher ago
Chapter 21: Group Mission ago
Chapter 22 : Group Mission (2) ago
Chapter 23 : Group Mission (3) ago
Chapter 24: Camp ago
Chapter 25 : Second Spell ago
Chapter 26 : Eternal Damnation ago
Chapter 27 : New Weapon ago
Chapter 28 : Just The Basics ago
Chapter 29 : New Tricks ago
Chapter 30 : No Escape ago
Chapter 31 : Kyle ago
Chapter 32 : Difference In Power ago
Chapter 33 : Blank ago
Chapter 34 : I Am Me ago
Chapter 35 : Before Me There Was Also Me ago
Chapter 36 : Brewing (1) ago
Chapter 37 : Brewing (2) ago
Chapter 38 : Brewing (3) ago
Chapter 39 : Brewing (4) ago
Chapter 40 : Brewing (5) ago
Chapter 41 : Prelude ago
Chapter 42 : Prelude (2) ago
Chapter 43 : War (1) ago
Chapter 44 : War (2) ago
Chapter 45 : War (3) ago
Chapter 46 : War (4) ago
Chapter 47 : War (5) ago
Chapter 48 : Farewell's and Hello's ago
Chapter 49 : - : ago
A Note From Pharaoh Kymani ago
Chapter 50 : Interlude ago
Chapter 51 : Interlude (2) ago
Chapter 52 : WarBeast ago
Chapter 53 : WarBeast (2) ago
Chapter 54 : WarBeast (3) ago
Chapter 55 : WarBeast (4) ago
Chapter 56 : WarBeast (5) ago
Chapter 57 : Abdication (1) ago
Chapter 58 : Abdication (2) ago
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Uriel
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Can't blame the grammar.

It's a good storyline, and good grammar actually, just not the best.

It's the writing that's bad, it's something you can't blame on grammar or plot or cliches, just inexperience. Given time I'm sure you'll get much better Mr. Author, for now just avoid using so many adverbs and you should use full stops more often.

Try telling the info needed through a whole chapter rather than dumping it into one paragraph, and remeber to show not tell.

interesseret
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Story's good so far, the grammar isnt

The title says it all. The story is interesting, and im thrilled to see where it goes, but the story is full of typos, wrong punctuation, and missing or wrong words.

I suggest getting a proofreader

endoria
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Grammar and spelling errors in every second sentence.

Character development is non existent.

Story is a random sequence of unrelated events.

World building does not exist.

Magic system is not explained.

"Power system" of the entities in the "worlds" is not explained.

MC so OP, even when he is outclassed in power by a lightyear, he still survives because screw logic.

 

tl;dr: If you value your sanity, don't bother reading.

JahDeer
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Awesome story not as much cliché

Really cool story hope you can continue to develope  it and not let it go flat. Could be a bit more discriptive but I have a pretty vivid imagination. Review has to be at least 200 hundred charters long sooooo bllllllaaaaaaaaah ion have anything else to saaaaaaaay. :/ don't know how to follow an author so I just added it to favorites