Why does everyone fear Zorian?

by Zyront

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Slice of Life

Disclaimer: the cover image was taken from the link: https://i.pinimg.com/736x/38/38/b4/3838b4c7b4b95400a0823763e3882bf0--photo-blue-excalibur.jpg because I suck at painting and i liked that picture.

 

The world is divided into 4 races: the Humans, the Dwarves, the Elves and the Beastmen. However, there are monsters that can be found all across the world.

But... some times things aren't as they seem. This is the tale of a man which all races called a demon, He is indeed a demon, but not because of his race or his nature, but because of his journey and the things that happened to him.

PD: might rewrite the history a little, its going to be my first public novel, my friends tell me im a good storyteller but ive never made something longer that a night time tale, im going to be updating slowly as the inspiration comes around. accepting tips and suggestions, its to be noted that english its not my native language but im trying to get better at it so im sorry for any wrong word.

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