Magic Continent Zero

Magic Continent Zero

by Bobbert

Long ago the world was in peril with infighting and bickering.   A great war broke out when the invading demon continent attacked the human continent.  The demons are much stronger than the humans but the humans were able to hold off the demons with their ability to use magic.  It all seemed lost until a great wizard rose up and helped lead the humans to victory.  A talent like the world has never seen.  His profound understandings of magic made him respected by all the nobles on the continent.   After the war he turned down all positions and decided to only teach the students he wanted noble or not.  These were the choosen 7 children and only them were given his direct knowledge on magic.

However, 20 years ago a great tradgedy befell the human continent.  No one knows the exact details but what was known is  a great magical barrier went up over 1/3 of the entire human continent that has stood ever since.  The teacher was betrayed by one of his students.  Himself and the rest of his students scattered across the human continent and into obscurity.

Our protagonist is of low birth and has no talent but longs to learn magic.   Usually only the rich nobles can afford magic teachers and the books needed.   Will he ever become the great wizard he wishes to be?

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There are no release dates for this story but I tend to try to drop 3 chapters a week spaced 2-3 days apart from each other.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: Magic Academy Test Part 1 ago
Chapter 2: Magic Academy Test Part 2 ago
Chapter 3: First Day of Class and Setting Out ago
Chapter 4: Setting Camp and The Hunt Begins ago
Chapter 5: The Shame of the House of Sun ago
Chapter 6: Students of Class 5 Fight ago
Chapter 7: The Merciless Sun ago
Chapter 8: Lee River ago
Chapter 9: Origin of a River ago
Chapter 10: The Old Man ago
Chapter 11: The Training Begins ago
Chapter 12: A Dainty Flower ago
Chapter 13: Questions About The Future ago
chapter 14: Parent Teacher Conference ago
Chapter 15: Mana and Magic ago
Chapter 16: Sparring Practice ago
Chapter 17: Worst First Date Ever ago
Chapter 18: Healing and Moving Forward ago
Chapter 19: The Return ago
Chapter 20: The Grand Tournament ago
Chapter 21: Training class 5 ago
Chapter 22: Late Night Visit ago
Chapter 23: Held After Class ago
Chapter 24: Wash Away Despair ago
Chapter 25: A Fight Between A Ranks ago
Chapter 26: The Selection Tournament ago
Chapter 27: The Selection Tournament Part 2 ago
Chapter 28: The Selection Tournament Part 3 ago
Chapter 29: Travel and Reunion ago
Chapter 30: Mending the Leaf ago
Chapter 31: The Old Man's Training ago
Chapter 32: Entering Province 6 ago
Chapter 33: The Black Rose ago
Chapter 34: The Black Roses Thorns ago
Chapter 35: A Desperate Situation ago
Chapter 36: The Ambush ago
Chapter 37: Growth ago
Chapter 38: Traveling back ago
Write up - End of story ago

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EpicDumpster-fire
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The genius MC hides his strength? A wise legendary wizard come off from retirement just to train the mc? a childhood friend with a crush for the protagonist? a tournament?

Seriously the story it's so cliche it hurts!

The story had a good start with the MC driven in persuing his dreams, that's the only positive thing i can honestly say, i hope the author keep working on this story and his writing style.

 

P.S: If thi's the author first attemp at writing, it's not all that bad.

aldrinkhan
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The novel is far from perfect but it is a recommended read. The main weakness is the grammar. I can see lots of mistakes... Ex. Threw - through, manor - manner, is /are, where - were, etc. But the story is quite good especially liked Harry Potter, Percy Jackson and the likes.