Prime Magus of Earth

Prime Magus of Earth

by SeraphDarkfire

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"In the beginning, I had no idea what was going on. My brother and friends were gone, my sight was gone, and yet I still saw things, things about this world that no one else knew. I'm not special, or gifted, anyone could have done what I did. I just got lucky, especially after everything that happened afterwards.

Magic already existed, it always had. Humans just didn't know how to do it, didn't know how to nuture that small spark in them. Now you do."

- Prime Magus of Earth, Alexander Sorin.

November 2021 Update: So, it has been four years since I stopped working on this. Reading back, the first "book" is finished. It has what feels like an ending to an arc. Now it isn't a perfect story but I still like it and I can see myself starting the second book, might even this on Amazon or something. My biggest regret was never coming up with artwork for the cover though. Maybe I'll look into it.

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Marajuu
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Wow, i really really enjoy your story so far! Can't wait to read more:D
And i really do like your way to describe magic! It just feels like it could be reality and that is so fantastic! Besides i like Alexander, he is the kind of MC i really do enjoy and can sympathize with.
So great job and thank you so much for writing and sharing your story with us.

Tenroujima
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Fantastic so far, wish there was more :(

I so wish there were more than 7 chapters at the time of writing this review. This story is one of the best on RRL in my opinion, and I wish there were hundreds of chapters that I could binge on right now. 

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deus0
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  • Very interesting start. Cant wait to see where it goes. Mc is unlucky, he can never finish that book :'(. Love the descriptions!
Nephalim81
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I'm really enjoying this story, but as of this review you haven't post for 4 days. Which isnt in line with the speed you were updating before. Now I understand that life is priority over fictions. I just wish you continue this tale.

Hosteen
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A good start with a decent setup for the next book. Hopefully they'll continue with the series.

colbymckinzie@yahoo.com
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Where are you author?! We’ve been waiting over 8 months for he next chapter! Get back to writing this story please!!!!!