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Life is not a game.

Nor is it something to enjoy.

No.

What it was is a challenge.

A challenge to us, to see who can live longer.


My first work, if you have suggestions as to writing style, please tell me in the comments.

I also wont update that regularly.

I am after all simply a normal person writing his first story, please be lenient.

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Childish Dreams

Childish Dreams

Chasing my childish dreams

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I like this story wonderful quality. I would love to thank you for this amazing story.🤣