Vacation of a God

by Thanatos001

Original HIATUS Action Fantasy Romance Harem LitRPG Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Slice of Life Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

Many Gods rule the universe but only one God stands at the top. The Supreme God. The God of Creation and Destruction. No one can question his existence No one can overpower his existence.

The Supreme God bored of his position decided to take a leave. His job in the grand the scheme of things is to keep the higher and lower Gods in check. In his elusive existance he has already created  the first of Life, Gods, Worlds, stars and universes and also destroyed many too. Over the eons of his rule the Gods are terrified of his name. All incidents and balance breaking events are taken care of by the famous angels who work in his stead.

A God who stands on the top but has nothing to do decides to take a vacation! Where will he go and what adventures await?

Story about an overpowered mc doing whatever he wants. First story im writing. Thanks for reading.  :)

Cover picture found from Pintrest. (Link to picture)

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Iori Angel
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I've unplugged my brain and just enjoy!

So far the story is easy going, and it gives me the impression that it is written for fun. Not something ground breaking, but we are used to some of the trops and cliché but the execution is good. No wishy washy mc who hesitate, or annoying female lead. That's a plus already. So, far at chapter 10 the story is awesome, let's see if its stay that way.

SirTekk
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I enjoy this story. Please continue.  HIATUS is evil!

ahsankhan
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keep up the good work, this story has the potential. 

NoodleSlinky
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MOAR

This is amazing. I mean yes, it is somewhat cliche and yes, things are overpowered but holy crap I like the limits and I like that they aren't idiots or the sort to pick fights for fun. No, they're there to live life as people and I'm loving every second of it.

Yami Seeker
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Alright! This is gonna be a run along review but I hope you read till the end. As for those that don't. I thank you for even scrolling down.

First, the style is average. Even so, average in a good way. At least it is not a total mess where we cannot tell who is talking or what is happening. Also, word of advice, give a bit of descriptions. (Don't overdue it since it ruin the story sending it to deepest area of hell.)

Second, the characters are stock characer but isn't every story like this? Each story has a character similar to another. Some to the point of not being able to tell the difference and others can. As for Angelica, although she blushes a lot that is alright. Thats her personality. Damb pimpo can't use his brain to figure this out (The reviewer *Although I'm not saying any names* *Cough* ETEZ *Cough*.) Moving on, the protagonist is also different. Although some find him cliche kind. It really isn't. Have you read of a character always being mischevious, smirking, and sympathetic. I bet some of you did but that is not the point. This is one of the rarer types. So shut your trap and listen to my words that are practically rants.

Finally! The story is good. I hope you keep writing since I suck at doing that. I appreciate all the effort you put into this.

As for the bad comments and reviews. Just ignore them. Most people are ignorant and stay in that state while reading novels. Just like those cliche characters of arrogant snobs that believe they know it all.

MalayanaZZ2
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just binge-read the story. it is awesome. keep up the good work!