The Celestial Games

by Enkai_64

Original HIATUS Drama Fantasy Mystery Psychological Harem Magic Portal Fantasy / Isekai School Life Wuxia Xianxia
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

 ?Warning contains ero scenes?

You think being summoned to another world is a good thing, well Hitora sure did? Better than living in a boring place like earth, given the choice to go to another world, as Hitora thought. But the cold harsh realities of living in this violent world, where greed and power rules over anything, hits Hitora hard. As he is betrayed, exploited and tortured.

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This is a novel, that well is my first, I don't think it's amazing or anything, just a little hobby to pass time off. 

 

 

 

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gnarlytreeman
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The story is missing a lot.  The MC has no personality, the side characters have no personality, the pace the plot it set to is rediculous was too quick with no explaination.  It is like a grade school kid decided to write down stories of their imaginary friend. The world building is non existent, and the story needs more writing to generate plot flow.  Right now the plot feels like someone put a bunch of plot pieces in a bag, shook them up and pulled 1 out for each paragraph.  I suggest limiting plot elements between 1 per chapter to 1 every 4 chapters.

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The mc's kind of an asshole, but that's what makes him intersting, in my opinion. I used to read this Novel on his weebly, it's taken down now. Apparently he lost a lot of the documents, so now he's rewriting the chapters. The story get's really good as the chapters progress. 

eromasterydydhdh
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The novel seems quite interesting , it seems to be very similar to the original but the mc more rash and savage. 

Theres only been a few chapters but it seems like a very fun ride so far

Logdfhf
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I have never read such a great novel! It has a few flaws, but the story is literally great! It's fun and world building is done along the way, the heroines are good, the mc is interesting and compelling. I can't wait for the rest of the story!