Naulo's Corruption

Naulo's Corruption

by Yinang

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An amnesiac wakes up in a body of a child. Reincarnated into a foreign world and in the midst of a great war. Living in a world filled with magic but having no talent in magic. However, with an observing mind and manipulating personality the power of magic is just a tool. Why reincarnated? Why amnesia? Is there more to the war than what is seen? Secrets of the lost memories are more than what they seem to be, hiding something horrendous.

 

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blackmazino
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WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY DROP?? I FUCKING LIKE THIS STORY

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At first the tittle is not really convincing to me, however when i finished read after 3 chapter... This FF story has a lot potential!! 

The establishment of the characters, and the story that full of secrets and make me to read more and need more chapter....

unfortunately, from chapt 1 to 8 there is not a main focus on the story.. so a bit of lack in there...

 

Anyway cant wait for more chapter.... good luck on the ff ...

i have a high hopes for your ff  in the future...