Lost Blood

Lost Blood

by aqsta

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

Hi everyone!

I haven't really thought this story through. I have a few ideas related to the plot but most of the things I will decide while I write it. I hope you will enjoy it. 

 

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Like the title said, a good start. You need to ensure you are using the correct word, and edit a bit. Will continue reading and revise the rank as you write more.