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A cultivator is someone who can channel the natural energy through their body, strengthening their own body or performing almost magical feats. At birth, everyone manifests an inborn spell, a power belonging solely to them.

  Yao Jun was born in a branch of the Yao clan, his inborn spell is considered a useless spell, a spell with no effect. Despite his useless spell, Yao Jun is steadfast and determined to cultivate, spending each day training his body to the limit.

 All he wanted was to be allowed to live his life as he wanted, but fate makes a fool out of everyone, and his life would end up becoming so much more than he ever expected, taking him to the dark side of the world and beyond. When the Demon's Gate opens, what will it bring to the world?

 

 
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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Auxiliary chapter, law tiers. ago
Cultivation levels. ago
Acquired Demonic beasts. 'Spoilers.' ago
Chapter 0.1: Yao clan, Yao Jun. ago
Chapter 0.2: Family. ago
Chapter 0.3: One mistake and everything crumbles. ago
Chapter 0.4: Leaving the city. ago
Chapter 1: Yao Jun ago
Chapter 2: Flying Fish Yao Clan ago
chapter 3: Garden of Eden ago
Chapter 4: Yao Jun's birth ago
chapter 5: Repaying debts ago
Chapter 6: Golden Moon Town ago
Chapter 7: First Day in Golden Moon ago
Chapter 8: Life in Golden Moon ago
chapter 9: Inner disciple tournament. ago
Chapter 10: Pianzi ago
Chapter 11: Root of all problems ago
Chapter 12: Cloud Wilderness Expedition ago
Chapter 13: Peng Group ago
Chapter 14: Fang Xun ago
Chapter 15: Campfire Dreams ago
Chapter 16: Mist Eagle ago
Chapter 17: Bloody fight ago
Chapter 18: First attempt at Mental Energy ago
chapter 19: Twisted Space ago
Chapter 20: Unfamiliar Land. ago
Chapter 21: The desolate plain ago
chapter 22: Wan Yi ago
Chapter 23: Vast Plains City. ago
chapter 24: Yun Yantian. ago
Chapter 25: Traveling Together ago
chapter 26: Finding a Friend ago
Chapter 27: My Heart is clear. ago
chapter 28: World of Ice. ago
Chapter 29: Sword Mountain. ago
Chapter 30: Eye of the World ago
Chapter 31: Demonic Beast Forest. ago
Chapter 32: The first lock. ago
Chapter 33: The changes to his body. ago
Chapter 34: The new garden. ago
Chapter 35: The forest guardian. ago
Chapter 36: Demon God's Gate ago
Chapter 37: Forest of blades. ago
Chapter 38: A myriad of weapons. ago
Chapter 39: The song of swords. ago
Chapter 40: A town ablaze. ago
Chapter 41: A grieving Demon God ago
Chapter 42: The wandering Demon God ago
Chapter 43: The rage of the Demon God ago
Chapter 44: Crumbling The Nine Heavens. ago
Chapter 45: Sword Empyrean Heng Jiang. ago
Chapter 46: Soaring Cloud City. ago
Chapter 47: Guo Jiahao. ago
Chapter 48: The three continents ago
Chapter 49: Guo Zhe ago
Chapter 50: Start of a nightmare. ago
Chapter 51: Failed negotiations. ago
Chapter 52: Execution. ago
Chapter 53: I will return for my ring ago
Chapter 54: Burn the tree and plant it anew. ago
Chapter 55: If the strong feast on the weak, then we shall feast on the strong! ago
Chapter 56: You rely on me, and i will rely on you. ago
Chapter 57: I am here to kill you ago
Chapter 58: Fight him. ago
Chapter 59: Solo fight ago
Chapter 60: A magnificent palace and a majestic garden. ago
Chapter 61: Eternal Stream City. ago
Chapter 62: To the Deng Province. ago
Chapter 63: Meeting Wan Yi again. ago
Chapter 64: Everyone has their own plans. ago
Chapter 65: Do what you want to do. ago
Chapter 66: You are in charge. ago
Chapter 67: Lesson one. ago
Chapter 68: Anywhere you go, i will follow.
Chapter 69: People from the Yang clan. ago
Chapter 70: Guo Shui Kang. ago
Chapter 71: Stealing information. ago
Chapter 72: A bloodbath to herald your birth. ago
Chapter 73: Demonic serpent. ago
Chapter 74: Serpent Emperor of Darkness, Ba-Shei ago
Chapter 75: The land walks. ago
Chapter 76: Filled with questions. ago
Chapter 77: I will take care of everything. ago
Chapter 78: I made a mistake. ago
Chapter 79: I will make sure they can't hurt you. ago
Chapter 80: I will bear the hatred. ago
Chapter 81: I told you so. ago
Chapter 82: None of you need to leave. ago
Chapter 83: The soul. ago
Chapter 84: A deeper fusion. ago
Chapter 85: Visage of a demon god. ago
Chapter 86: Double awakening. ago
Chapter 87: Guan's Edge City. ago
Chapter 88: Yao Luying. ago
Chapter 89: First part of Crumbling The Nine Heavens. ago
Chapter 90: A blue pearl ago
Chapter 91: One Sword To Free The Heart. ago
Chapter 92: Yang continent. ago
Chapter 93: Ruined village. ago
Chapter 94: Gathering allies. ago
Chapter 95: We meet again. ago
Chapter 96: Lin Ren. ago
Chapter 97: I failed you. ago
Chapter 98: Five idiots. ago
Chapter 99: Introductions. ago
Chapter 100: Nine gates. ago
Chapter 101: They will speak and you will listen. ago
Chapter 102: Infiltration. ago
Chapter 103: Gnawing Hunger. ago
Chapter 104: Li Quan. ago
Chapter 105: I refuse to be a dog. ago
Chapter 106: Titan's Gate. ago
Chapter 107: Returning to the Guanyu continent. ago
Chapter 108: Yang sibling's abilities. ago
Chapter 109: To the Grand Quan continent. ago
Chapter 110: Southern Tundra. ago
Chapter 111: Snow's Heart Town. ago
Chapter 112: Winter Wind Town ago
Chapter 113: Cui Dong. ago
Chapter 114: My light in the darkness. ago
Chapter 115: Yes, just me. ago
Chapter 116: Sharing the same fate. ago
Chapter 117: No interest. ago
Chapter 118: A period of waiting. ago
Chapter 119: Spring blooms in the Demon God's Gate. ago
Chapter 120: Dual cultivation. ago
Chapter 121: Opening Titan's Gate. ago
Chapter 122: Broken Gate. ago
Chapter 123: To the north. ago
Chapter 124: Testing their strength. ago
Chapter 125: Five future rulers. ago
Chapter 126: Opening of the hidden realm. ago
Chapter 127: Inside the hidden realm. ago
Chapter 128: Fear and terror. ago
Chapter 129: A ruined eye. ago
Chapter 130: Titanic bird. ago
Chapter 131: Inside the forest. ago
Chapter 132: Wei Zhong Jun. ago
Chapter 133: A stolen fighting style. ago
Chapter 134: Shadows approaching Golden Moon. ago
Chapter 135: A familiar voice, a burning longing. ago
Chapter 136: A hollow mountain. ago
Chapter 137: Facing the horde. ago
Chapter 138: Crimson Empress Zhuyin. ago
Chapter 139: Carving the second channel. ago
Chapter 140: A test of strength. ago
Chapter 141: Unexpected faces. ago
Chapter 142: Son of lightning. ago
Chapter 143: Atop the shattered mountain. ago
Chapter 144: Kirin of ice, Zhuanxu. ago
Chapter 145: The sixth Demonic beast. ago
Chapter 146: Battle in Golden Moon. ago
Chapter 147: Four out of five. ago
Chapter 148: Slowly gathering together. ago
Chapter 149: All gathered up. ago
Chapter 150: An unstable world. ago
Chapter 151: Yuan Shen. ago
Chapter 152: First battle against a God Gate. ago
Chapter 153: Reuniting. ago
Chapter 154: Another trial. ago
Chapter 155: Battle of four gates. ago
Chapter 156: Through the spatial rift. ago
Chapter 157: Leylan Grievin. ago
Chapter 158: Beneath the frog in the well. ago
Chapter 159: Evolution, new names. ago
Chapter 160: Weapon ranks, Old Shade. ago
Chapter 161: Plan to leave the planet. ago
Chapter 162: Soar as dragons, sink as carps. ago
Chapter 163: Striking a deal. ago
Chapter 164: Army formation. ago
Chapter 165: Nine Supreme Laws. ago
Chapter 166: Start of the battle. ago
Chapter 167: Strange crystal. ago
Chapter 168: A true test of strength. ago
Chapter 169: Picking up the rewards. ago
Chapter 170: The marvelous spoils of battle. ago
Chapter 171: Yao Jun discovers the laws. ago
Chapter 172: Surging undercurrents. ago
Chapter 173: Starborn clan, Merged Heaven clan. ago
Chapter 174: Back into the fray. ago
Chapter 175: Starting a massacre. ago
Chapter 176: First encounter with the Spider Hive. ago
Chapter 177: The war intensifies. ago
Chapter 178: The scattered fragments. ago
Chapter 179: The might of the truly powerful. ago
Chapter 180: Bloodstained Black. ago
Chapter 181: The final battle. ago
Chapter 182: The wild feast. ago
Chapter 183: The changing war, two new laws. ago
Chapter 184: The horrid king. ago
Chapter 185: Temporary end to the war. ago
Chapter 186: Prince of destruction. ago
Chapter 187: The Sebettu. ago
Chapter 188: Free eagle. ago
Chapter 189: Shattered Ocean Planet. ago
Chapter 190: Horrid Ocean King. ago
Chapter 191: Preparations for the fourth. ago
Chapter 192: Jinxed ago
Chapter 193: Unfolding brilliance of the king. ago
Chapter 194: Body cultivation, arriving at Earthen Peak. ago
Chapter 195: News of home. ago
Chapter 196: Four-Peaks planet. ago
Chapter 197: Crestborne King, sneak attack. ago
Chapter 198: Worst case scenario. ago
Chapter 199: Start of a clean sweep. ago
Chapter 200: Two years in the blink of an eye. ago
Chapter 201: Three trials ago
Chapter 202: I don't believe I know you? ago
Chapter 203: Reappearance of disintegration. ago
Chapter 204: Last battle. ago
Chapter 205: Start of a bloody competition. ago
Chapter 206: All-god's List. ago
Chapter 207: A single word. ago
Chapter 208: Sixth Heaven Demon King. ago
Chapter 209: World of flame. ago
Chapter 210: The second test. ago
Chapter 211: Freakishly strong. ago
Chapter 212: End of the battle. ago
Chapter 213: Into the abyss. ago
Chapter 214: The darkness of the abyss. ago
Chapter 215: Pushing the trial forward. ago
Chapter 216: Why don't you laugh? ago
Chapter 217: Tang Guanyu, Blood Ocean's Hunger. ago
Chapter 218: Finally home. ago
Chapter 219: Storming the meeting. ago
Chapter 220: Utter dominance. ago
Chapter 221: Calling down the overseer. ago
Chapter 222: The whereabouts of his family. ago
Chapter 223: Yao Jun's plan. ago
Chapter 224: The castle beneath the waves. ago
Chapter 225: Nine Heavens Soul Emperor. ago
Chapter 226: Finishing up his remaining business. ago
Chapter 227: Time to return. ago
Chapter 228: Top three. ago
Chapter 229: First news of a Divine beast. ago
Chapter 230: Territory of the Nine-Tailed Fox. ago
Chapter 231: Four gathered together. ago
Chapter 232: Calamitous luck. ago
Chapter 233: Glory of the Demon God. ago
Chapter 234: Requesting assistance. ago
Chapter 234: Xuhuan Huo. ago
Chapter 235: Demon God Yao Jun. ago
Chapter 236: Campfire meeting. ago
Chapter 237: All-God's Auction. ago
Chapter 238: The Demon's Gate. ago
Chapter 239: The grand auction. ago
Chapter 240: Temporary alliance. ago
Chapter 241: Arrival of the battle. ago
Chapter 242: Unworthy King. ago
Chapter 243: Cries of the God Gate. ago
Chapter 244: Secret Revealed. ago
Chapter 245: Void. ago
Chapter 246: From a Greedy King to a Demon God. ago
Chapter 246: A God's power. ago
Chapter 247: Handing over the points. ago
Chapter 248: Ren Jingyi ago
Chapter 249: Avaritia. ago
Chapter 250: Battle for the tower. ago
Chapter 251: Monarch's Nine Rebirths. ago
Chapter 252: Soul cultivation, the start of the hunt. ago
Chapter 253: Finally, face to face. ago
Chapter 254: Facing Peyton Eluard ago
Chapter 255: You talk too much. ago
Chapter 256: Lost God galaxy. ago
Chapter 257: A gift for Little Gray. ago
Chapter 258: Start of the war. ago
Chapter 259: Threatening Ren Shuren. ago
Chapter 260: Final task on the list. ago
Chapter 261: Luosho Li's second fragment. ago
Chapter 262: The name of the bloody king. ago
Chapter 263: The weary king and the demon's throne. ago
Chapter 264: King of Demonic Deities. ago
Chapter 265: The roar of war. ago
Chapter 266: The answered prayer. ago
Chapter 267: Move. ago
Chapter 268: The faded engraving, the empty spot. ago
Chapter 269: For the one they believe in. ago
Chapter 270: The first loss. ago
Chapter 271: The name of the Demon God. ago
Chapter 272: the site of the funeral pyre. ago
Chapter 273: No saviors, no salvation. ago
Chapter 274: King of hell. ago
Chapter 275: Demon of three gates. ago
Chapter 276: For this moment. ago
Chapter 277: Reunion. ago
Chapter 278: Hope. ago
Chapter 279: Ruler of the Demon's Gate. ago
Chapter 280: Yama. ago
Chapter 281: Egong Pangli. ago
Chapter 282: Not worthy. ago
Chapter 283: The fang's sharpness. ago
Chapter 284: The demon in the rain. ago
Chapter 285: From one monster to another. ago
Chapter 286: Dream or nightmare? ago
Chapter 287: The ever-hungering. ago
Chapter 288: Who fell into whose trap? ago
Chapter 289: Split the world. ago
Chapter 290: Bloody battle. ago
Chapter 291: Victor and loser. ago
Chapter 292: Goal achieved. ago
Chapter 293: Reclaiming what was lost. ago
Chapter 294: Setting foot onto the grand stage. ago
Chapter 295: Endless Dawn universe. ago
Chapter 296: Pan clan. ago
Chapter 297: Terrible Tyrant. ago
Chapter 298: Demon God's Authority. ago
Chapter 299: The demon's excitement. ago
Chapter 300: The dragon's fury. ago
Chapter 301: Planning negotiations. ago
Chapter 302: Blood in hand- ago
Chapter 303: Breakdown in negotiations. ago
Chapter 304: I am the god of swords. ago
Chapter 305: sky-reaching rose. ago
Chapter 306: To the throne of God ago
Chapter 307: Calamity Vine, Declaration of war. ago
Chapter 308: Three points of interest. ago
Chapter 309: Return to the Pan clan. ago
Chapter 310: Why is it just you? ago
Chapter 311: Second Disciple. ago
Chapter 312: Weapons of the Demon God. ago
Chapter 313: Prince of Demonic Greed. ago
Chapter 314: Bloodwind ranks. ago
Chapter 315: Wordless vow. ago
Chapter 316: Six reports. ago
Chapter 317: The Divine hunt. ago
Chapter 318: King of the eternal tomb. ago
Chapter 319: Refined blood. ago
Chapter 320: I warned you. ago
Chapter 321: Five options. ago
Chapter 322: One exchange. ago

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Hyperion915
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you keep doing those time skip and just skipping over character interactions, not even bothering to flesh out the characters, so when the people he was gathering herbs with betrayed him for example, I felt literally nothing, and the entire thing felt really fake. its the same with every other part of the story, and it feels more like you're writing a summary of what's happening than an in-depth account that is supposed to draw in a reader. do a rewrite and dont skip over stuff, as it is now your "story" isnt worth reading. its a good idea, and i dont mean to discourage you, but i know very little about any of your characters and dont care what happens to them either

ILeaveAReviewWhenIDropIt
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The world view is vague. How many continent? Just how large is the Main Clan? How come demon and Human fight if they only have different type of power but have the same appearance? The characters don't feel so alive. The farce in the medical garden came and went, i didn't even felt sad for the MC. the MC is so dumb, he knows that he can get stronger by killing and using his gate. But he went to other town where he can't use the gate and planted herbs.

 

Samhain
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It is a good novel, but reading it all that catches my attention the most is how unintelligent the MC is... and its not that bad of a novel, so that sad for me cause it makes it very difficult to read for me, and im running out of good novels to read lol

Blackjakas
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Twas good.

Chap 49-50 totally ruined it for me but i'll try to continue reading. It's just what I hate the most;(SPOILER ALERT)you befriend someone who you completly trust but it turn out that he was a fucking emperor and now a fucking ennemy clan kidnap you saying "We don't want but we must" and just torture you for no real reason other to create an alliance whom they are trying to blackmail. That's some dumb shit. As if just because the kid is an emperor everybody's gonna follow his words... "Ah! My friend is being tortured lets help the torturer YAY!". Fucking dumb.

 

Last story that did something that I really didn't like got away with a shitty 3 stars I'm proud to have managed to control myself enough to at least give a fair note.

Update! 03/29/2018

Well I read some more bit it seems like there is a huge inconsistance.

The bastards knew they were gonna kill him but still said whatever's good to be useless. Once again the way they interact with each others it's obvious that the bads guys will kill him when they're done but you made him try to seems like a good guy. Honestly it feels like a failed experiment of a caracter so I will not mind it and just continue reading.

 

The rest feels logic and well written but there is only one things I didn't like and its the scene with the princess or something. It made me feels like a made up thing. Just making her having a ton of spys watching them while they speak of important things is not how I imagine a kingdom or whatever they are to do.

Corrupt peoples are everywhere so imagine a spy...

Well I don't have anymore time but just know that I do enjoy your story.

CaptainLoser
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I am really enjoying this story it has great characters and a super cool world I’m not very smart but I think the grammar is good the only problems I have are 1.) the names are hard to figure out haw they should sound and 2.) sometimes the people do stupid things and I get frustrated because I can see a similar or more efficient way to do it

JustinAnkar
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Great work. The only qualm I have is a few spelling or grammar errors, but that's something that will get picked up with future editing passes. 

The main character's unique ability is pretty awesome, even if it goes out of control a little bit. 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

I'm a fan of the wuxia/xianxia style novel so it's not a problem to see this style. It's quite nice that you aren't relying heavily on the genre's tropes, nor has there been a string of 'silkpants' causing trouble. Quite nice. I wouldn't call it a masterpiece of the genre, but I don't feel bad binge reading it like many of the most popular or big c-novels. Keep up the good work. 

BlackScorpio
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A much-appreciated novel which by no means should be looked over. 5/5 

DarkAether
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So i ended coming across this series and decided to check it out......... And damn do i like it the mc's power is awsome sounding and i REALLY cant wait to see how the mc develops with it

xcares
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The MC is an idiot. His cheat power is so overpowered that he can get stronger just with the help of his parents but he still picks the irrational route. 

He is also part demon and he still blunders into demon detector arrays... just to force the plot.

It's a waste of time. Can't believe i made it so far 😂