Metaworld Chronicles

by Wutosama

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Contemporary Fantasy Female Lead Magic Reincarnation Slice of Life Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Gwen Song awoke in a world that was not her own, in which everything she was familiar with had been replaced. Instead of airplanes and electricity, this 21st-century Earth is ruled by magic and dragons; humanity survives in a land of magical beasts and otherworldly beings, protected by shielded enclaves and magical constructs.

Follow Gwen across the world as she struggles to rebuild her life in this strange new reality. Behold a tale of adventure, friendship, and (of course), magic! Witness as she grows from a simple grade school student to a fully-fledged Mage, through university and beyond, discovering the secrets of a world made unreal by magic and mysticism.

 

Vol. 1 (Ch 1 - 47) Now on sale! eBooks edited, formatted and some scenes are re-written! 

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Bonus ::  Gwen's Outfits
Character Summaries :: Character Summary (Newest) 
Glossary and Magic System :: Glossary

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - Some Things Begin, Something Ends ago
Chapter 2 - Awakening ago
Chapter 3 - Pass Conceded ago
Chapter 4 - Familia ago
Chapter 5 - The Longest Day ago
Chapter 6 - It takes Three to Tango   ago
Chapter 7 - A Step in the Right Direction ago
Chapter 8 - No News like Bad News ago
Chapter 9 - A Team   ago
Chapter 10 - A Moment of Truth    ago
Chapter 11- Dark Ritual ago
Chapter 12  - Instructions and Instructors ago
Chapter 13 - The Calm ago
Interlude 1 - A Hint of Thunder ago
Chapter 14 - Oedipus Wrecks ago
Chapter 15 - The House of Huang ago
Chapter 16 - A New Leaf ago
Chapter 17 - First Blood ago
Interlude 2 - The Looming Cloud ago
Chapter 18 - What Great Beast ago
Chapter 19 - The Woods have Wolves ago
Chapter 20 - Riding Hood ago
Chapter 21 - Breath ago
Chapter 22 - The Snake, the Lady and the Maiden Fair  ago
Chapter 23 - Candles ago
Chapter 24 - Follow the Red Rabbit
Chapter 25 - First Impressions are Important ago
Chapter 26 - Secrets ago
Chapter 27 - Full Fathom Five ago
Chapter 28 - A Long Way Down ago
Chapter 29 - Sweet Hearts and Sweet Meats ago
Chapter 30 - Two Dogs on a Hearth ago
 Chapter 31 - Some Things Never Change ago
Chapter 32 - Coming Home ago
Chapter 33 - An Old Man's Favours ago
Chapter 34 - Apples from the Tree ago
Chapter 35 - The Grind ago
Chapter 36 - Here be Monsters ago
Chapter 37 - Of Monsters and Gwen ago
Chapter 38 - A False Start ago
Chapter 39 - The Woods are Lovely, Dark and Deep ago
Chapter 40 - Miles to Go Before She Sleeps ago
Chapter 41 - Sleeping Beauty ago
Chapter 42 - The Very Hungry Caterpillar ago
Chapter 43 - Crossroads ago
Chapter 44 -  Scar Tissues ago
Chapter 45 - Skeletons ago
Chapter 46 - A Slice of Paradise ago
Chapter 47 - He who Hunts Monsters ago
Character Summaries ago
Chapter 48 - Cruel to be Kind ago
Chapter 49 - Fortune's Fool ago
Chapter 50 - Close Encounters ago
Chapter 51  - Full Pelt ago
Chapter 52 - Great Expectations ago
Chapter 53 - Premonitions ago
Chapter 54 - No Harm in Trying ago
Chapter 55 Poor Boys and Rich Girls ago
Chapter 56 - A Curious Encounter ago
Chapter 57 - Show and Tell ago
Chapter 58 - When shall we Three ago
Chapter 59 - One Thousand and One Nights ago
Chapter 60 - Valkyries ago
Chapter 61 - True Lies ago
Chapter 62 - First World Problems ago
Chapter 63 - An Old Bird Dreaming ago
Chapter 64 - Into the Wild ago
Chapter 65 - A Favour for a Favour ago
Chapter 66 - Shortcomings ago
Chapter 67 - The Migloo Ghost ago
Chapter 68 - Dark Tidings ago
Chapter 69 - Until Dawn ago
Chapter 70 - House of the Rising Huang ago
Chapter 71 - Til the Fat Lady Sings ago
Chapter 72 - Sharing is Caring ago
Chapter 73 - So Long, and Sanks for the Fush ago
Chapter 74 - All work and No Lunch ago
Chapter 75 - Days of Our Lives ago
Chapter 76 - A Crooked Deal ago
Character and Magic Summary 2 ago
Chapter 76.5 - Interlude 3 - Dark Waters ago
Chapter 77 - Anticipations ago
Chapter 78 - A Rose and its Thorns ago
Chapter 79 - The Greater the Expectation ago
Chapter 80 - The Harder the Fall ago
Chapter 81 - A Sight for Sore Eyes ago
Chapter 82 - When the Levy Breaks ago
Chapter 83 - An Unfortunate Encounter ago
Chapter 84 - Broken Chains ago
Chapter 85 - Wave Break ago
Chapter 86 - The Devil's Advocate ago
Chapter 87 - True Lies ago
Chapter 88 - The Widening Gyre ago
Chapter 89 - The Falcon cannot hear the Falconer ago
Chapter 90 - The Worst are Full of Passion ago
Chapter 91 - Reeling Shadows of Desert Birds ago
Chapter 92 - The Darkness drops Again ago
Chapter 93 - Spiritus Mundi ago
Chapter 94 - When Time is Short ago
Chapter 95 - The Salty Saviour ago
Chapter 96 - Come Together ago
Chapter 97 - Picking up the Pieces ago
Chapter 97.5 - Epilogue for Arc 1- No Birds Sing ago
Chapter 98 - No News Like Bad News ago
Chapter 99 - Cabin Fever ago
Chapter 100 - Stifling ago
Chapter 101 - Creepers and Crawlers ago
Chapter 102 - O Captain ago
Chapter 103 - Respite ago
Chapter 104 - Detour ago
Chapter 105 - Taken ago
Chapter 106 - Suspicious Minds ago
Chapter 107 - An invitation from a Doppelgänger ago
Chapter 108 - A Sliver of Silver ago
Chapter 109 - A Meeting at the Threshold ago
Chapter 110 - Cold City ago
Chapter 111 - More ways than One ago
Chapter 112 - To Skin Some Cats ago
Chapter 113 - Remember Me ago
Chapter 114 - Introspection ago
Chapter 115 - No Longer Alone ago
Chapter 116 - A Tale of Two Towers ago
Character Summary 3 ago
Chapter 117 - Hold on and Let Go ago
Chapter 118 - Human Nature ago
Chapter 119 - Risk and Reward ago
Chapter 120 - Visions and Revisions ago
Chapter 121 - Spotty Hands ago
Chapter 122 - Night Whispers ago
Chapter 123 - A Matter of Face ago
Chapter 124 - Halcyon Days ago
Chapter 125 - A Course of Course ago
Chapter 126 - Off to see the Wizard ago
Chapter 127 - Dog Whistles ago
Chapter 128 - Questions and Answers ago
Chapter 129 - A Trojan Gift Horse ago
Chapter 130 - A Gift once Given ago
Chapter 131 - Prepatory ago
Chapter 132 - Fault Lines ago
Chapter 133 - The Great Divide ago
Chapter 134 - Picking up the Pieces ago
Chapter 135 - Regrets ago
Chapter 136 - Mixtures and Admixtures ago
Chapter 137 - Skinner's Box ago
Chapter 138 - Queries and Answers ago
Chapter 139 - Good Neighbours ago
Chapter 140 - Knots ago
Chapter 141 - The Age of Experience ago
Chapter 142 - Orientation ago
Chapter 143 - Lessons of Life ago
Chapter 144 - A bob on the Snout ago
Chapter 145 - Classes and classes ago
Chapter 146 - Mo Money, No Problems ago
Chapter 147 - Routine ago
Chapter 148 - The Troubles ago
Chapter 149 - Paternal Issues ago
Chapter 150 - A Charmed Life ago
Chapter 151 - Fight or Flight ago
Chapter 152 - The Wrong way to Duel ago
Chapter 153 - Indigestion ago
Chapter 154 - The Greener Grass ago
Chapter 155 - The Damned ago
Chapter 156 - When the Red Mist Rolls in ago
Chapter 157 - Blood and Guts ago
Chapter 158 - Hesitation at the Threshold ago
Chapter 159 - Between Concrete and a Hard Place ago
Chapter 160 - Once more into the Breach ago
Chapter 161 - No Place should Murder Sanctuarise ago
Chapter 162 - Mightier than the Sword ago
Character Summary 4 ago
Chapter 163 - Dreams of Tomorrow ago
Chapter 164 - Balance in all Things ago
Chapter 165 - Rest and Relax ago
Chapter 166 - Of Peaches and Men ago
Chapter 167 - Shadows on the Wall ago
Chapter 168 - For Thou art with Me ago
Chapter 169 - This Far, no Further ago
Chapter 170 - Nighthawks ago
Chapter 171 - Great Anticipations ago
Chapter 172 - No Mitigating Nourishment ago
Chapter 173 - Nothing Quite like Loneliness ago
Chapter 174 - Pinky Promises ago
Chapter 175 - Detours ago
Chapter 176 - Laughing the Night Away ago
Chapter 177 - Tempus Fugit ago
Chapter 178 - Hai Five ago
Chapter 179 - Goats and Monkeys! ago
Chapter 180 - Frogger ago
Chapter 181 - A Model of You ago
Chapter 182 - Bush Meat ago
Chapter 183 - Happy Campers ago
Chapter 184 - Come a-Waltzing Matilda with Me ago
Chapter 185 - Her Beauty and her Terror ago
Chapter 186 - Silencing the Lamb ago
Chapter 187 - Karma Comes Calling ago
Chapter 188 - Millstone ago
Chapter 189 - Calamity Gwen ago
Chapter 190 - Truth will Out ago
Chapter 191 - A Series of Unfortunate Events ago
Chapter 192 - The Black Goat ago
Chapter 193 - How to Make Gravy ago
Chapter 194 - Confessions of a Dragon-Kin in Hangzhou ago
Chapter 195 - How Much do I love Thee? ago
Chapter 196 - How to fold a Paper Tiger ago
Chapter 197 - Whetting the Appetite ago
Chapter 198 - The Undertow ago
Chapter 199 - A Stick in the Mud ago
Chapter 200 - Curtain Call ago
Chapter 200.5 - Interlude - A Prickling of the Thumb ago
Chapter 201 - Green-eyed Gwen ago
Chapter 202 - To her Door ago
Chapter 203 - The Cuckoo Crows Thrice ago
Chapter 204 - Don't Dream its Over ago
Metaworld Spellcraft & Glossary ago
Chapter 205 - Bookworms ago
Chapter 206 - Chekhov's Dragon ago
Chapter 207 - Where the Side Quests Roam ago
Chapter 208 - Trouble in Paradise ago
Chapter 209 - Dances with Deerhounds ago
Chapter 210 - Six Degrees of Separation ago
Chapter 211 - I have become... ago
Chapter 212 - Who let the Dogs Out? ago
Chapter 213 - Silence of the Apes ago
Chapter 214 - Monkey in the Middle ago
Chapter 215 - What lies Beneath ago
Chapter 216 - Favour of the Father ago
Chapter 217 - Many Jasons in Pursuit ago
Chapter 218 - Loftier Ambitions ago
Chapter 219 - Figuro Magnifico ago
Chapter 220 - A Step in the Right Direction ago
Chapter 221 - Who watches the Watchers ago
Chapter 222 - Credit where Credit is Due ago
Chapter 223 - Dai Harder ago
Chapter 224 - December Days ago
Chapter 225 - The Dumplings of Prosperity ago
Chapter 226 - A Tuft of Flower ago
Chapter 227 - A Tall Poppy ago
Chapter 228 - I guess that's why they call it the Blues ago
Chapter 229 - A Crucible's Caress ago
Chapter 230 - The Devil's Plea-Bargain ago
Chapter 231 - Fingerpainting ago
Chapter 232 - No Source of Honey ago
Chapter 233 - The Milk-Tea of Human Kindness ago
Interlude - Percy's Day Off ago
Chapter 234 - What doesn't kill you... ago
Chapter 235 - Some like it Hot ago
Chapter 236 - A Paradox of Prophesy ago
Chapter 237 - Brothers and Sisters ago
Chapter 238 - An Interview with the Void Sorceress ago
Chapter 239 - Flight of the Bumble Bee ago
Chapter 240 - Slippery Slopes ago
Chapter 241 - The Perils of Fame ago
Chapter 242 - Paranoid Draconoid ago
Chapter 243 - Many hands make Light Labour ago
Chapter 244 - The Fonder Heart ago
Chapter 245 - Second Chances ago
Chapter 246 - Milu No.5 ago
Chapter 247 - The Importance of a Strong Handshake ago
Chapter 248 - A City of Gold ago
Chapter 249 - Cocks and Hens ago
Chapter 250 - Chain Reaction ago
Chapter 251 - Old Fashioned ago
Chapter 252 - When it rains, it pours ago
Chapter 253 - Small Mercies ago
Chapter 254 - Foul Play ago
Chapter 255 - Shattering the Peace ago
Chapter 256 - Riposte ago
Chapter 257 - Virtue in Vengeance ago
Chapter 258 - Accounting for Victory ago
Interlude - One Night in Yangon ago
Chapter 259 - Burmese Days ago
Chapter 260 - Kitty come Home ago
Chapter 261 - Waiting for Godot ago
Chapter 262 - O Brother, where art thou? ago
Chapter 263 - Veni Vidi Vici ago
Chapter 264 - A Murderer and a Villain ago
Chapter 265 - Tricks and Trades ago
Chapter 266 - A Mage of many Talents ago
Chapter 267 - Hell hath no Fury ago
Chapter 268 - Sour Grapes ago
Chapter 269 - Homewrecker ago
Chapter 270 - Fight Fire with Lightning ago
Chapter 271 - Fair Winds and Ill Tides ago
Chapter 272 - How to Train your Wyvern ago
Chapter 273 - Between a Void-Beast and a Hard Place ago
Chapter 274 - A Brave New World ago
Chapter 275 - Land of the Risen Sun ago
Chapter 276 - Serpents in the Midst ago
Chapter 277 - The Sun Also Rises ago
Chapter 278 - A Modest Proposal ago
Chapter 279 - Birds of a Feather ago
Chapter 280 - Troll in the Trees ago
Chapter 281 - Where the Wyverns Crow on Trees ago
Chapter 282 - Out of the Blue ago
Chapter 283 - The Seeds of Trust ago
Chapter 284 - An Unexpected Boon ago
Chapter 285 - Into the Maelstrom ago
Chapter 286 - A warm up ago
Chapter 287 - A Tale of two Horrors ago
Character Summary 5 ago
Chapter 288 - Takanakuy ago
Chapter 289 - The Call of the Void ago
Chapter 290 - Battle Royale ago
Chapter 291 - The Hands of Victory ago
Chapter 292 - The Setting Sun ago
Chapter 293 - Gears and Levers ago
Chapter 294 - Nightmares ago
Chapter 295 - Lessons from the Underground ago
Chapter 296 - Prelude to Premonition ago
Chapter 297 - The Pale Prince of Pretoria ago
Chapter 298 - What Tomorrow Brings ago
Chapter 299 - Shattering Expectations ago
Chapter 300 - Caliban, Interrupted ago
Chapter 301 - Prelude to the Long Night ago
Chapter 302 - The Living and the Dead ago
Chapter 303 - Peace for the Dead, Life for the Living ago
Chapter 304 - The Three Little Necromancers ago
Chapter 305 - Wyverns First ago
Chapter 306 - Party Crasher ago
Chapter 307 - War Games ago
Chapter 308 - Et Victoria ad Defectum ago
Chapter 309 - Humbled Hearts ago
Chapter 310 - Call of the Deep ago
Chapter 311 - The Living Dark ago
Chapter 312 - How to lasso a Lich ago
Chapter 313 - All Good Things ago
Chapter 314 - Tis better to have Loved ago
Chapter 315 - Legion ago
Chapter 316 - After the Banquet Ends ago
Chapter 317 - Where the Kookaburra Laughs ago
Chapter 318 - Love's Labour ago
Chapter 319 - The Old Man and the Gwen ago
Chapter 320 - The Snake Giveth ago
Chapter 321 - All Stations to London ago
Chapter 322 - The Monkey's Paw ago
Chapter 323 - Naked Villainy ago
Chapter 324 - House Rules ago

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John C
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I’ve got nothing done!

I found this title through a link on Facebook and started reading, intending to pass a few minutes reading. Yep, a few minutes. Since then, 218 chapters and 1,000,000 words later, I have got nothing else done at all. Riveting and all consuming. I am totally in love with this literary Gwen. Thank you, Wutosama.

Kenyaa
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Great story, great magic system!

I had this story on my to read list for 6-7 months, and started to read it a few times without really getting in to it. However this friday somewhere around chapter 20 i got hooked, and read up to chapter 177 by sunday. Now i am patiently waiting for the next chapter!

ps. the university magic clases are the best!

UrobrouS
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Isekai meets chinese fantasy, all in western style.

This is a story of a 30-is australian office lady in the economic sector going to bed and waking up in a world of fantasy and terror where man goes on the menu right next to the fried rice and general tso's chicken (which isn't actually chinese BTW).

Grammar - the often black sheep of these wonderful arts, since many of the authors are either poor in the english department or simply don't speak it natively.
The grammar of the author is fairly good, although some errors do occur - mostly in long and complex words, and that's usually substituting an "e" for an "a" or the other way. very negligible, and the story MORE than makes up for it.

Characters:

They're diverse and plentiful - some are more forgettable and matter less and later in the story you'd be forgiven for forgetting a thrid of the lesser ones, but those that matter, have a clear character built, have their habits, speech patterns, and feel like people rather than a ventriloquist talking from multiple mouthes.

Story:

Apparently australians can transmigrate - who knew?
Without spoiling too much, you are treated to a story about an adult woman getting a second chance on life in what can only be described as an alternate, magical, and extremely hostile reality. lots of hilarity, abject terror, villains you love to hate, and tense, entertaining (and slightly revolting) combat.
Don't expect an HP bar, here the life points are measured in severed limbs and lengths of guts.

Style:

The author is clearly influenced by chinese fiction quite heavily, and subsequently makes it their bitch and parades it around town in a micro-thongqini. While chinese elements remain, the story is clearly western in style and has a unique soul to it, to the point where I binged it in four and a bit days and felt robbed when I discovered it only had 243 chapters out so far.

Updates seem to be regular enough, with a chapter every 4-ish days with moderate length, totaling to around 9 chapters a month.

 

FINAL VERDICT:

This isn't a "The wandering inn", but the style and quality puts it in the same league - few manage to put out the quality and sheer overwhelming quantity piratebea can pump out, twice a week,
This isn't a chinese fantasy with a somewhat racist-sexist protagonist that collects waifus like yu-gi-hoe cards (get it? hoe? hah.) and wipes out towns because he asked for croutons and got one too few.

What this is, is an honest-to-god, true to the almighty cangooroo, ORIGINAL story with metric fucktons of content and lore, and increadible potential.

I doubted for a month and a half whether to read this, and regretted those moments dearly.

 

EXTREMELY RECCOMENDED.

TMalander
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It grabs you, and won't let go.

So - this is not the most well written story I've read. It's not even the most well written web based story I've read - but it's damn close. The story grabbed me from the start, and hasn't let go in over 270 chapters.

There are som grammar related errors here and there in each chapters, which is only natural since the author is writing (on his phone, no less) and editing himself - but I dare say it has gotten significantly better since the early chapters. 

The characters are a bit high and low; there are a number of them that are quite fleshed out, while there are also a few that feels flat and generic - mainly various antagonists. The MC, Gwen, is intriguing, and it has a depth to her - although, to be a bit critical, it feels like that depth takes a vacation every now and then. 

Overall, it's a damn good story, and I will definitely stick with it until the end. Sure, some things are solved a little too conveniently for Gwen, but it's not too jarring, and it's certainly better than many other stories. What is really amazing is, despite over 270 existing chapters, the story feels like it's just getting started - I take this to mean that we will be able to enjoy the Metaworld for a few years to come still. Yay!  

Alpalonia
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I would class this as one of the best novels of this website at the moment and is one I would recommend to read.

Style: I really like the style of the story. I can't really call it special however it reads well, which alongside the good pacing make it enjoyable to read.

Story: Story is constantly engaging, especially as it progresses. The pacing is mostly good despite some moments that seem to come out of nowhere (not necessarily bad though).

Characters: The main character in this is believable, likeable, and interesting. The other characters are also very good with strong character development. Many have backstories and unique motivations. The development of characters is also well paced - enough growth to feel satisfying while also having a good amount of room to continue growing (something many stories fail to properly balance). 

Grammer: All good here. Reads well, and mistakes are always fixed.

Overall: Really good. Recommended reading this.

*bonus for regular and lengthy chapters

Tricky
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One of the absolute best on RR

Wutosama and Andursama are the best authors bar non on RR, 

I have nothing else to add other than that you have captured my imagination like few have over my life, and I humly thank you for your time and work.

Reading this novel has been and shall be one of my rare delights in this mundane world we live in. 

Rajdeep Das
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Best female mc story in RR

reading the book for the past few months and I had to make a account here to rate it. The book is very detailed. Chara are engaging and if you get just past the first fifty chapter I think you will also come to love our void sorceress. Mc although had transmigrated and she will say that she is kinda adult she hasn't really matured completely. It's like living your young days but with more gusto. Like what if I had done this different. Her parents though trash you can also see that they are relatble you can find these type of people everywhere. P.S I am completely sure that she has a complex about daddy men type cause she thinks she never got close to him as he is completely hopeless. Her friends are her emotional support and when she finds herself in a pinch you will find her using the knowledge she has learn from here. And no not knowledge about modern science. But our great thinkers(philosophist) it could be annoying sometimes but in a world like that her plagiarizing is new and she also tries to use it always for her own needs I tell you her job was a business commerce one after all you know people' like her are. The world building so far has been described in many ways and times and it's going not bad. And the male character is definitely almudj he has been supporting her everywhere physically and mentally. You guys have heard men-women beastman-women time for ancient beings-women lol I am joking but the guy is possessive I tell you. Magic oh the magic I like how it's described and all but this while NOM shit was the hardest thing to take in. I personally believe that humans even in that world could do great and not just live like ants for mages service. Seriously everywhere they are always described as backward people living in slums and just because there is no law there heinous crimes are everywhere. But still it's my best fic in royal road for female mc story. Give it a try and big P.S girls will like those clothes description in every chapter it just goes over my head though.

Seraphy
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Why did i have to catch up

One of those stories where you feel an immense amount of dissapointment when you finally catch up to the latest chapter.

Trying to read other stories while you wait for more releases doesn't either work because everything is just so subpar in comparison.

LordofVoids
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Pretty cool.

Good story

Good grammar

Good style

alright characters

Only problem is some of the characters are truly impossible. Like Evelynn (Evie) or whatever her name is. Gwen's usage of her name to calm down is pretty out-of-place. I don't understand how anyone would use "cuteness" as an anchor to reality. Really..... I mean, I guess it makes sense, but it is too unreliable? So yeah, if you can get past the first arc in Singapore (loads of cringey, weird interactions), the story's characters become more solid in the China arc.

But don't get me wrong, there are plenty of good plot points that make up for the cringey dialogue in the beginning. Just.... be prepared for a lot of unnecessary "cute" moments.

Diamondninja
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One of my favorites. Highly recommend!

Awesome Urban fantasy world with a very creative and unique magical system that ALMOST beaches into LitRPG and even though it may have a lot of influences and inspiration from d&d magical classes it has plenty of creative and distinctive traits that set it apart.

The characters have interesting personalities and the story flows well and the characters descriptions posted throughout the story are great with wonderful artwork.

Can't recommend this enough, especially with the frequent updates (since I've been reading at least.)

👌👍✌️🖖

**Update: it keeps getting better!