Righteous Fox Immortal (Postponed until further notice)

Righteous Fox Immortal (Postponed until further notice)

by FoxKing

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity

After a stroke of bad luck, Haiyang reincarnates into the body of a fox. After reincarnating Haiyang's luck takes a turn for the best and finds out he is in a world of qi, demon beast, and cultivators he meets an unnamed immortal who changes his fate. Then After seeing the world for what it truly was, sets off on a journey to change this world or die trying.

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I've given up on this one until I get my act together and rewrite this thing. 

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Omi Nya
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He did what cultivators do. He trained, meditated, trained again. He, well, cultivated. You know the drill. Replace our standard protagonist with the fox. Fox does the usual fox stuff - it hunts, eats, mates. And cultivates.

Yep, that is the story. The story about fox cultivator. There are all required and welcomed elements to move the plot - family, love, enemies, friends. But all wrapped up in a furry format.
If you are a fan of fast-paced cultivation stories - you should check it out.

The grammar is a bit rough, but that is easily fixable.