Smith-Knight

Smith-Knight

by Donkishin

In a world where kings rule over the land, knights live and die by way of the sword and monsters roam the land, sea, and sky. A young blacksmith will have his chance to make a name for himself! Along with the allies he makes on the way, from Humans, Demons, Elves, and more! Will he be able to live through it and gain greatness beyond his hopes and dreams? Find out by reading!

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Donkishin

Donkishin

Grand Master of Bad Jokes, Reader, Writer, Gamer, and Anime/Manga Fan.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Fairmaw Arc, Chapter 1: A Forest Request ago
Fairmaw Arc, Chapter 2: Bringing A Girl To Town ago
Fairmaw Arc, Chapter 3: Battle For The Town ago
Fairmaw Arc End, Chapter 4: The Journey Begins ago
Road To Gorz Arc, Chapter 5: Forest Pit Stop ago
Bonus! Character Bios/Character Poll! (Poll Closed) ago
Road To Gorz Arc, Chapter 6: Into The Fire Part 1 ago
Road To Gorz Arc, Chapter 7: Into The Fire Part 2 ago
Road To Gorz Arc, Chapter 8: And A Mage Appears! ago
Road To Gorz Arc, Chapter 9: Dungeon Time! ago
Road To Gorz Arc, Chapter 10: Bad Weather ago
Bonus! Character Bios! ago
Bonus! New Character Poll!(Closed) And Results chapter! ago
Road To Gorz Arc, Chapter 11: A Hunting Wolf And A Noble Ram ago
Road To Gorz Arc, Chapter 12: The Skill Of An Alpha ago
Road To Gorz Arc, Chapter 13: A Slimy Library Day ago
Road to Gorz Arc, Chapter 14: The Librarian's Here ago
Road To Gorz Arc End, Chapter 15: Welcome To The Big City ago
Bonus! Character Bios! (Chapters 11-15) ago
Update! A.K.A Words of a mad man ago
City of Gorz Arc, Chapter 16: Making a Friend? ago
City of Gorz Arc, Chapter 17: The New Digges ago
City of Gorz Arc, Chapter 18: A Boy Named Bread ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 19: Welcome to Troville ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 20: A Crafty One Is A Betting One ago
Bonus! Character Bios! (Chapters 16-20) ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 21: A Simple Quest ago
City of Gorz Arc, Chapter 22: Looking Towards The Future ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 23: While Blake's away 1 ago
City of Gorz Arc, Chapter 24: Let The Training Begin! ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 25: A Week's Work ago
Bonus! Character Bios! (Chapters 21-25) ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 26: Test Day! ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 27: Mechanical Mayhem ago
City of Gorz Arc, Chapter 28: ~A Sweet Time In The Gale~ ago
City of Gorz, chapter 29: A Thief's Offering ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 30: A Slight Miscalculation ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 31: Crystalline Hunt ago
Update! A.K.A Words Of A Madman part 2: The maddening! ago
City of Gorz Arc, chapter 32: A Magical Experience ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 33: A Ram's Deal ago
City Of Gorz Arc, Chapter 34: While Blake's Away 2 ago
City Of Gorz Arc End, Chapter 35: Let The Guild Days Begin! ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 36: Settling in ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 37: New Quest And New Bond ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 38: Hunting For The Green Part 1 ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 39: Hunting For The Green Part 2 ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 40: Hunting For The Green Part 3 ago
Thanks For The Past Year! ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 41: The Water Level Part 1 ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 42: The Water Level Part 2 ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 43: Fresh Catch ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 44: A Bad Apple ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 45: Hatchling ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 46: A Ram's Request ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 47: Onwards To The Rainbow! ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 48: Old Friends Meet Again! ago
Season Greetings and Badly Time Break! ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 49: Fighting The Rainbow! Part 1 ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 50: Fighting The Rainbow! Part 2 ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 51: Fighting The Rainbow! Part 3 ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 52: Fighting The Rainbow! Part 4 ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 53: Fighting The Rainbow! Finale! ago
Update! A.K.A Words Of A Madman Part 4: I skipped part 3!? ago
Guild Days Arc, Chapter 54: While Blake's Away 3 ago
Guild Days Arc End, Chapter 55: Spoils Of War ago
Guild Days Arc Bonus , Chapter 56: ~Fiery Embrace~ ago
Side Quest Arc, Lutwig & Renaissance, Chapter 57: The Elf King Comes ago
Side Quest Arc, Lutwig & Renaissance, Chapter 58: A Dark Family Meeting ago
Side Quest Arc, Lutwig & Renaissance, Chapter 59: A Princess And Her Knight ago
Side Quest Arc, Lutwig & Renaissance, Chapter 60: Heart, Duty Or Heritage! Part 1 ago
Side Quest Arc, Lutwig & Renaissance, Chapter 61: Heart, Duty Or Heritage! Part 2 ago
Side Quest Arc, Lutwig & Renaissance (End) Chapter 62: Heart, Duty Or Heritage! Part 3 ago
Side Quest Arc, Medraut, Chapter 63: Fledgling ago
Side Quest Arc, Nathan, Chapter 64: An Unlikely Teacher ago
Side Quest Arc, Nathan, Chapter 65: Bath Time! ago
Side Quest Arc, Nathan, Chapter 66: An Off Day ago
Side Quest Arc, Nathan, Chapter 67: Family Magic ago
Side Quest Arc, Nathan, Chapter 68: Sigil Sect Summons Part 1 ago
Side Quest Arc, Nathan, Chapter 69: Sigil Sect Summons Part 2 ago
Side Quest Arc, Nathan, Chapter 70: Sigil Sect Summons Part 3 ago
Side Quest Arc, Nathan, Chapter 71: Sigil Sect Summons Part 4 ago
Side Quest Arc, Nathan, Chapter 72: Sigil Sect Summons Part 5 ago
Side Quest Arc, Nathan End, Chapter 73: Sigil Sect Summons Finale! ago
Side Quest Arc, Medraut, Chapter 74: Juvenile ago
Side Quest Arc, Blake & His Items, Chapter 75: Maintenance Part 1 ago
Thanks Again For Another Year! ago
Side Quest Arc, Blake & His Items, Chapter 76: Maintenance Part 2 ago
Side Quest Arc, Blake & His Items, Chapter 77: In Bless And At A Los ago
Update! A.K.A Words Of A Madman Part 5! ago
Side Quest Arc, Blake & His Items, Chapter 78: By The Smith God's Will ago
Side Quest Arc, Blake & His Items, Chapter 79: A Brief Look Into Los ago
Side Quest Arc, Blake & His Items, Chapter 80: Like Master, Like Student ago

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Hyperion915
Overall

Good concept, mediocre story

The premise is really interesting, but the execution is very flawed.

Grammar:

Way too many run on sentences, mostly because the author forgot to add a period somehow. Quite a few instances of bad grammar in general, maybe use something like grammarly or word to root out the errors.

Characters:

Shitty, generic Anime characters, not sure what possessed the author to resort to weeb shit rather than properly fleshing out normal characters. Main character is vaguely strong like some shonen main character, his dad is vaguely mysterious, his sword girlfriend is wierd and without her memories, his sister is a creepy Stalker trope, its all just so predictable and boring. Might change in later chapters but I can't read anymore

Dialogue and narration:

Really cringey, not much else to say about it. Reads like it was written by a hyper 14 year old who has never written before in his life, and the little comments the author makes in the middle of the story are the icing on the bad comedy cake. The comedy should come from the story itself, not be shoved in at every opportunity with no regard for pacing, tone, or reader immersion

Overall:

I don't care how original a concept or a character is, but you have to put in some effort to make whatever you're writing your own, or what's the point? The concept is great, the setup works just fine, none of the characters are so terrible that I can't grow to like them if they're written well enough, but the juvenile humor and uninspired writing drag the story down into the mud. Not a bad first attempt, and pretty good for someone around the author's age (or at least the age I'm assuming he is), but the story itself grates on my nerves

Ps. Sorry about the unstructured review, I made this in a hurry and I've got shit to do

Pps. Keep trying donkishin, despite all my criticism your writing isnt terrible. Just ditch the quirky nonsense and focus on developing the story and characters properly

Book Lord
Overall

So far I'm loving the story, and yes while I'm not to far into it the humour and shenanigans are enough to make me think ill be reading this for a while. Only thing I'd suggest would be add a bit of romance to it, as Blake has shown that he is interested in the girls but thats only my suggestion, just don't make him choose one of the girls over the others. I hate harem novels that do that. 

Anyway keep up the good work and I love the novel