The Gamer’s Godship.

by Nimero

Warning This fiction contains:
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Growing up an immense castle, Alfred has everything he wanted.Brand new cars, private jet, expensive and branded clothes, one can say that he was living in paradise. Despite owning all of that luxurious stuff, he felt miserable and lifeless because everything was given to him by his parents ever since he was a kid. He had no goals and had a general disinterest in life. The only times he felt alive was when he was playing Virtual reality games and building powerful legendary empires from scratch in the games which gave him a sense of accomplishment.

Follow Alfred as he was reborn and grown up parentless into a strange barbaric world where magical Beasts rule the mountains, Giants possessing unimaginable raw power, Demons leaving a swath of destruction in the path, humans fighting for survival. It is the world where the strong feast on the weak. There was, however, a gaming system dwelling inside of his body that will accompany him through his countless trials and tribulations while leaving nothing but legends in his wake.

Obviously I don't own this picture. If the owner want it to be removed just let me know and I'll do it immediately.

Also , I am not a native English speaker so don't expect a perfect grammar. I've only learned English about 5 years ago , please bear with my bad grammar.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
chapter 1 - Rebirth ago
chapter 2 - Red Cloud City and Longwei ago
Chapter 3- Father And Son Dialogue ago
Chapter 4- The Merchants' Caravan ago
Chapter 5- An Unusual Encounter ago
Chapter 6 - Level up Simultaneously ago
Chapter 7- Training (part I) ago
Chapter 8- Training (part II) ago
List of names. ( not a chapter.) ago
Chapter 9- Training ( part III) ago
Chapter 10- The State Of Shen , Yang Chao ago
Chapter 11- Unexpected Benefit and The Incoming Beasts Hunt ago
Chapter 12- Leaving For the Magical Beast Land. ago
Chapter 13- The Beasts Hunt ( part I) ago
Chapter 14 - The Beast Hunt ( part II) ago
Chapter 15- The Beast Hunt ( part III ) ago
Chapter 16 (................) ago
Chapter 17– Extermination ago
Chapter 18 ago
Chapter 19 ago
Chapter 20 ago
Chapter 21 ago
Not a chapter. ago
Chapter 22 ago
Chapter 23 ago
Chapter 24 ago
Discord server ago
Chapter 25 ago
We Finally have a Patreon Page!!! ago
Chapter 26 ago
Chapter 27 ago
Vol 2 - chapter 28 ago
Chapter 29 ago
Chapter 30 ago
Chapter 31 ago
Chapter 32 ago
A small glossary. Unfinished ago
Chapter 33 ago
Chapter 34 ago
Village’s name ago
Chapter 35 ago
Chapter 36 ago
Chapter 37 ago
Chapter 38 ago
Chapter 39 ago
Chapter 40 ago
Chapter 41 ago
Chapter 42 ago
Chapter 43 ago
chapter 44 ago
Chapter 45 ago
Chapter 46 ago
Chapter 47 ago
chapter 48 ago
chapter 49 ago
chapter 50 ago
Power Ranking Sheet ago
chapter 51 ago
Announcement , a good one ago
chapter 52 ago
Chapter 53 ago
Chapter 54 ago
Final showdown ago
Chapter 55 ago
Map of the Sacred Mainland. ago
Chapter 56 ago
Chapter 57 ago
Chapter 58 ago
Check it out. ago
Chapter 59 ago
Chapter 60 ago
Chapter 61 ago
Chapter 62 ago
Chapter 63 ago
( V3) Chapter 64 ago
Chapter 65 ago
Chapter 66 ago
Chapter 67 ago
The choice is yours. ago

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ZeroChan345
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This is a good review...promise ;)

Story started great with a kids who's parents were killed and then he wanted revenge. For that he needed to grow stronger and yatatata the same cliche that you were doing and then your own thing to give it some spice.

That there should have been your story.

Spoiler: Spoiler

 MORE SPOILERS AHEAD...WELL MORE LIKE MORE SHIT AHEAD

Now to anoooother terrible thing you did :) (I don't like where my mc is going with his personality so I'm gonna give him all of the memories of his past self's and give him a 180° turn to being a cold hearted arrogant asshole that believes he has no match) Did I get that right? Sure as hell think I did.

Now if I haven't drove you away yet from how shitty this story will turn out to be unless it gets a rewrite then you will probably like it...till the author gets another one of his spasms and add multiple personality disorder to the mix to write even less.

Sinder
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 I like the idea, but could not get past the first 5 chapters due to two of my big pet peeves: stories in present tense (it's possible that this was dropped along the way) and very long paragraphs (the latter only when I am reading on my computer).

You have a good idea and I wish you the best of luck!

Aspartame
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I kind of like it, it's pretty good stuff. "grown up parentless"... that's kind of misleading. It was what I was hoping for, but not what I recieved. No adventures of a wandering op infant on the side of a monster infested mountain. That was what I was lead to believe, and this was... parents coddling and giving their demon possessed baby anything he wants, in their castle protected from the evils of the outside world. Power given and not earned. That I cannot abide.

Thraydyne
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Always loved the idea of cultivation with game aspects but there are so few of these stories and most of them get dropped, really looking forward to how this plays out. Good start so it looks very promising, very few grammar errors so easy to read and the story flows well. 🤣🤣

XtroyerZmaster
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I'm loving this story.
So far there is nothing in history that can be labeled as wrong or boring.
Read this fiction, it will be worth your time.

HasniShaolong
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Good Story laughing So far there is nothing wrong or boring it's good storyy for spending time 

and for grammar the hell who cares yell 

kaneki_kun21123
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Well This Novel Have The Same Premise With The AI In The Martial World.. Which I Find Quite Good So Keep Up The Good Work Cheers! laughing

Frique
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This one looks promising somehow. I'm looking forward to the progress of the story since it's too early to give a definite review but I'm kinda excited to the possiblities that this one might hold. At least, I hope that this one won't be suddenly dropped.