Infracto Animo

by Kurayn-sensei

Original HIATUS Action Fantasy Psychological Tragedy Anti-Hero Lead Grimdark Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation Strong Lead
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Pain. Lies. Betrayal. Deceit. Struggles. Sufferings. Humans are an Embodiment of Sin. They Lie, Cheat, Steal, Kill, Threaten, Rape, Betray, and Blackmail. All of this in order to sate their Greed, their Lust, their Envy, their Wrath, their Laziness, their Gluttony and their Pride. As such, Humans go to incredible lengths to achieve their goals. This reaches the point where it can be called "Inhumane". But if Humans are an Embodiment of Sin, is there really such a thing called "Inhumane"? They say "God created us all equal." and "We are equal in God's eyes." yet why are there many people who are poor, sickly and deformed. Did they do something to be punished as such? Even before they were born? Is there really such a thing called "Equality"? Is there really such a thing called "Peace"? Is there really such a thing called "God"?

This is a story about the pain, struggles and sufferings of a man bound in a loop of never ending hatred and betrayal. Will he break the loop and end his ordeals? Or will he accept his fate and accept the loop? Light and Dark; Good and Bad; Angels and Demons; Abyss or Utopia. What will the man choose? Succumb to Darkness or reach out towards the Light. Now his story begins...

 

This story is pretty grim and depressing with vivid violence (gore on the later part). Sexual content is included but I don't plan on making this an ero-novel so it will just involve rape and (not-so)normal intercourse. MC starts normal and simple then turns anti-hero but... well, let's just say he won't stay that way but he also won't be a "good guy". Just a HEADS UP, I am not into satanism or cults or anti-christ but some themes and dialogues here are related to demons and stuff like that so to those who will read this, YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.

 

This story is a fictional novel by which is created by the author's own words and thoughts. Any person, circumstances or happenings that are written here is purely fictional and does not relate to anything that might coincide with the plot settings and characters of this story. This story is the manifestation of the author's (my) own understanding of pain, deceit, struggles, betrayal and suffering but it does not represent the author's (my) own experiences in life.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: Prayer and God ago
Chapter 2: Unfulfilled Wish... ago
Chapter 3: Scorned and Abandoned ago
Chapter 4: A new chance in Life or.... ago
Chapter 5: Endless Nightmare ago
Chapter 6: The End and the Start ago
Chapter 7: Whispers from the Void ago
Interlude: The Foreshadowing ago
Chapter 8: Descent to Avernus ago
Chapter 9: Advent of the Damned ago
Chapter 10: The Reckoning ago
Chapter 11: The Road to Oblivion ago
Chapter 12: End of Doubt ago
Chapter 13: Culling of the Wicked ago
Chapter 14: Summoning ago
Chapter 15: Rage and Retribution ago
Interlude II: The Cards are slowly revealing ago
Chapter 16 : Arrival of the 'Unclean Bloods' ago
Chapter 17: Coalition of the Unwanted ago
Chapter 18: A Fated Meeting that Shouldn't Be ago
Chapter 19: Start of the Mad Conquest ago
Chapter 20: Breaking the Leg of a Dying Giant ago
Chapter 21: Chaos ensues, Madness continues ago
Chapter 22: The Price of Conceit ago
Character Introduction, Countries and Coinage ago
Chapter 23: Conquering with an Iron Fist ago
Chapter 24: Fall of a kingdom, Unexpected discovery ago
Chapter 25: Increase in Strength, Decrease in Vigilance ago
Chapter 26: The Approach of Ill Omen ago
Chapter 27: Regret always comes in the End ago
Explanation about certain things. ago
Chapter 28: March of the Black Armies ago
Chapter 29: Annihilation of Hope ago
Chapter 30: Death of an Empire ago
Chapter 31: Rise of the Dreaded Kingdom ago
Chapter 32: No Respite for the Corrupt ago
Chapter 33: Why demons are feared ago
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TheDangerousDino
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- This is coming from the most recent chapter, chapter 18.

This a beautifully written story about the unfairness and revenge about a boy named Bell. From the beginning chapters, I bewitched and tearing up from the sheer creative cruelty that this character had to go through, but was essential for the tone and payoff to come in later chapters.

* Quick Warning: If your sensitive to religion or injustice and assholery this probably isn't for you *

Style: Though not bring anything new, I wrote and stylized perfectly come with understanding the main character, "Belial" and the events that come.

Story: Mr. Kuryan did his research, the references to Christian Mythology are very much apparent and appreciated throughout the plot. There were and still quite a few curve balls in ( SPOILER WARNING ) reincarnations due to me not getting a little more information about what happened and also, the suddenly being thrown into medieval? times. ( Then I question if I want to know :/ ) But ultimately it was needed to progress the story.

Though I do question what has the world that Bell lives in did with magic since day one, would love to read some kewl developments when you get to your revenge/adventure arch. 

Grammar: Honestly, I've seen NO problems and I don't care about it as long aS iTs ReAdabLe.

Oh! I was wondering why a lot of the series has an off-white color to the text

Character: Let me have a couple seconds to mention I had to take a breather and remind myself it was JUST A CHARACTER for the first few chapters.... Okay, I'm ready now.  Bell was SAD, Then lonely, angry and resentful, then totally badass and colder than ice, and I LOVE THAT. Dark fantasy and fucked up descriptions ( That rape section was a bit much, not sure if RRL admins will like that) are. my. GOLD. Iloveitandyousomuchatmomentkurayn. And this fucked up premise is consistent and used when needed without limit.

5/5 Character development for Bell for consistency and balance ( and the fuckwithmeandi'llroastyourlifeandthenpunishyouforbreathing vibe )

4/5 For characters, not him, the King, and his first mother. Though I appreciate that you don't use side characters as plot-glue for all problems

 

I love the story and suggest reading until chapter 10 for your opinion. If you get my corny goddamn joke awesome and five stars cause I binge read as soon as I started.

vesuvius
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A really good start to a cool story. Good backstory with lots of christran mythology, especally with some lesser known demons. A really well done revenge plot with a strong MC, Belial. Some of the rape scenes are hard to stomach, however I feel they are given the proper gravity, as the reader has to experience what the MC is exposed to. The MC Belial has a habit of giving too much exposition when exposing his enemie's crimes. He goes on triades that are much too long. His rants can be up to several paragraphs, and I fould myself scrolling through them. This story isn't so much as him destroying people with his awesome powers (which he does) but exploring human cruelty and relationships with one anther (or sheer domination). It's still early in the story (ch 20) so the political subterfuge has just been established but it all looks promising. 

firefrog600
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I am not very good with reviews so this isn't very constructive. However, I enjoy your story and wanted to support it. I don't support rape or any of the torturous activities in your book. But, it's a book about dark subjects sure I do not support such things in real life. But, this is a book so keep up the good work.