Waterbrand (completed)

by Mighty Moushie

Original COMPLETED Action Fantasy Short Story Tragedy Magic Male Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity

Larry was a med student on the verge of graduation when he is transported to another Earth.  After losing what he loves the most, will he prove to this new world that those who keep death at the gates can also usher him inside unexpectedly?

 

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This is my first story and it has no editor, so please keep that in mind.  It is only 14 chapters, so probably expect it to be finished posting after a week or so.

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13lack12ose
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Mighty Moushie has done it again

Mighty Moushie (author of Oblivion Online) has written a short story, whoop whoop!
Although quite different to his main work I still thoroughly enjoy this.

Well worth the (short) read :)

 

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Great short story

I gave 4 star on story coz i dont like the ending. But it nice simple short story. MC coolheaded and cunning, and somehow i got a feeling author is in medical expertise (doctor/med student). not many character in this story so i think its refreshing.