The Ayda Series

by kenoi131

Original HIATUS Action Drama Sci-fi Tragedy Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead Male Lead Strong Lead
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She was just an average small town Iranian girl, but when armed men took her away from her family, Ayda found herself the subject of a mad scientist. He poked and played with her brain, running cruel tests on a helpless child. The good doctor could never have imagined the beast he would awaken. Torture and experimentation turned Ayda into something else, into someone else.

Thrust into society as a dangerous living weapon, Ayda must find a way to reconcile a world which isn't ready to know she even exists. 

Book #1, "The Explosive Girl," has already been completed. Book #2, "Brave New World," is currently in progress.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 1: A Life Lost ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 2: Cages ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 3: Feats of Fury ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 4: Giving Support ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 5: Strings ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 6: Break the Chain Part 1 ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 7: Break the Chain Part 2 ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 8: Terms and Conditions ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 9: Belmont ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 10: Shopping Spree ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 11: Making the Grade ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 12: Endeavors ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 13: Understanding ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH14: Days Gone By ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 15: Artificial Altercations ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 16: Silver Screens ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 17: Closing Time ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 18: Determination ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 19: On the Scent ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 20: Sun Xin ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 21: The New Deal ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 22: First Strike ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 23: Continued Offensive ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 24: Axis ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 25: Allies ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 26: Changing Direction ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 27: Planting the Seed ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 28: Domestic Intrusion ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 29: End of the Line ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 30: End of the Line Pt. 2 ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 31: Aftermath ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 32: New Toys ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 33: Call to Action ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 34: Pulse ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 35: Of Kings and Consequences ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 36: Living Spaces ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 37: Zero Dollar Baby ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 38: Up to Speed ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 39: Don't Talk About Cage Fight Club ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 40: Breaking and Entering ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 41: The Grind ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 42: Freeze Up ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 43: The Radio Star ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 44: High Noon ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 45: Overthinking ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 46: Sundown ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 47: Once More Unto the Breach ago
Book 1, "The Explosive Girl" CH. 48: Superhero ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 1: A Day in the Life ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 2: Little Moments ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 3: Stakeout ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 4: Morning Meetings ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 5: Takes All Kinds ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 6: Pop Quiz ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 7: Atypical Arrest ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 8: Dinner Theater ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 9: Electric Boogaloo ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 10: Coffeehouse Rhapsody ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 11: Working Relationship ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 12: Catching Up ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 13: The House ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 14: Silent Antagonist ago
Book 2, "Brave New World" CH. 15: The Planning Phase ago

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Skitty
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The genres of this story are; Action, Contemporary, Drama, Sci-fi, Anti-Hero Lead, Female Lead, Male Lead, Strong lead.

This is a story with a Strong Female main character, with awesome combat that doesnt seem weird or outright 'impossible'. The MC is a strong willed girl that made it through years of torture, this didnt made her insane but instead strong. she ain't overpowered well in some sense it might but more in a human sense rather than a god.

The story got interesting parts to it that i could imagine happening in real life.

There isn't much Profinity in this story at the moment that it require such a tag, but it is definitely the case for Gore.

LouLou
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Ayda The Explosive Girl

I absolutley love Ayda! She is so amazing. This story is so well written that I have read it up to date and have never been bored. I am totally engrossed in this story and eagerly await each new chapter. This is a page turner and leaves you breathless and anxious. You feel the things Ayda goes through, you laugh, cry, feel fear and feel victory. She steals your heart! That is a sign of a good, well written story. You should feel the things that happen to the lead character and root for her, which you will do, for sure. I for one think this would make an awesome series on the SyFy channel, maybe even a movie. It's just a very well imagined and thought out story with great characters, good and bad. There has to be somebody to dislike and for the hero to fight against. The location of the story in Iran and the evil Doctor are very believable. When I first started reading this it was so believable that I, being a Mom, was mortified at the things that were being done to these children. It made me hate the Doctor too and love Ayda for fighting to stay alive and hope for a way out. Such a nightmare. If this was a shoddily written book it would not have held my interest and would not be believable. I think the author has done a  very good job with the settings, characters and story development. I can't wait to read more and find out how this story turns out. I am sure based on what I've read so far that there are many crazy, frightening adventures awaiting our Heroine, Ayda. I have fallen in love with her and trust me, I have been known to stop reading and put books down if they are boring in any way. The new chapters of Ayda can't come fast enough for me!

crgmn
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Add the tragedy tag pls..

I really liked your story, but i hate if dear characters are getting killed off especially if there is only one we know a little more about.

Therefore you need to add the right tag, would not have Started Reading if i knew..

otherwise superb Story 

Goldenfield
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well written but VERY poorly thought out.

the 5 year old acts like a 14yr old

can understand multiple languages

recognises things that she shouldnt be able to considering her past and age

Polluaaaa
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So far so good I'm enjoying the read thankyou