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One day the earth changed, the continents united once more forming the Pangea. The changes did not stop there, three new continents of the size of Pangea appeared in the ocean, if the planet is large enough to fit all the new continents, or the planet has grown is still a mystery to be solved.
Monsters began to appear throughout the continent, the state of the new continents is still a mystery. Different types of monsters began to appear in different regions.
In this era of change and adaptation, heroes and villains have appeared. The old civil, military and social order was destroyed and a new world order appeared. The fort wins. What fits survives. and the weak are dominated.
Magic and superpowers ceased to be fictitious stories and became reality. Monsters, demons, and dragons are no longer just imagination and come true.
The world has become a non-respawn type game. The law is to keep yourself strong to survive and survive to became strong.
The life of the Terrans has become a game. Literally, with status, attributes, resistances, levels and abilities and everything a game is entitled to.
The cover image is not my own. I copied it from the internet. I thought it was cool and it suited the story. All rights reserved for the owner of the image.
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Jesus Christ. The concept is amazing bro, great idea. Only problem, you leave stuff out. How does this dude know zombie categories if he was a zombie? It took you a few chapters of telling us that X1 zombie and V1 and Z1 did something to finally tell us what those categories mean. MC contradicts himself all the time. He sees a perk that will make him not require sleep but gives him no extra perks and takes it cause he doesn’t want to be weak. Cool. Next perk comes up that can make him pretty op, or dooms him to be bound to his mortal needs forever. Picks the requirement to eat,drink, and sleep cause that choice makes him able to f*ck. First perk he picked just got tossed out the window. You have a great idea author, it just seems like you forgot to upload a chapter in between the all current chapters because it’s like each chapter has something slightly different happening from the one before. And please for the love of god stop saying that your mistakes in spelling and grammar is ok because that’s how they do it in your country. You are posting this story in English on an English site. Please.
decent plot, however the time skip from relatively low in strength to op takes away from the quality.
I have read all the way to chapter 14. I have to say that this story has some good bones but and there are alot of BUTTS. The Grammar is atrocious I feel like I am reading light novel translation machine site. I am able to go over it due to my editor and proofreader background, however if the author wants to have a stable fan base and be able to sell it as a novel later there has to be alot of changes. For example, the author uses 3 to 4 different ways to spell zombies, I thought it was originally intentional, but the further I read the worst it got. Consistency in this novel so far is not availible. The way the author makes his character he is too op to fast. There are large gaps in the novel. I think this is due to the authors inexperience. From my POV it seems the author is in his early teens meaning he or she has not learned the skills to make a concisive novel.
The stats are also very confusing, because if you are an avid gamer as myself you would know that agillity is also known as speed, and alot of game developers put both of these traits under dexterity stat bonuses. I know the author already explained his reasoning behind this but by catagorizing and giving clear blue boxes of what each means can help the reader understand what type of world our author is building.
Overall, this is more of a very rough, rough draft and the author needs to work with other people to bounce ideas off of as well as help rewrite the spelling and grammar errors.
I have enjoyed reading the story. That said there is a decent amount of room for improvement. Namely spelling and grammar. It is bad enough that it jars you out of the story on occasion. That said I would still recommend reading this if you like the genre, always love evolution mechanics and the thought that goes into them.
I will edit my scores if you start regularly using a spell checker, you will mispell a word 3 different ways in one chapter. Now I know that spelling errors sometimes slip through even with spell-check, zumbi isn't one of them.
I appreciate the effort you put into writing, I think with a few extra editing steps, since you already have the important part of a fun concept, you could have a great story.
I like the story so far, it has potential and I see a bit of inspiration from God and Devil world but from a different perspective. I truely wish to see this story continue and for the author to grow.
It’s a really nice and interesting story. It’s kinda unique in its own way . Keep it up
MC is a little simple, I hope that he'll get more depth as the story goes.
Except that, the story is pretty good and having our world as a basis will help with the lore (good idea)
Story is bookmarked, hope to read you soon.
Love the story this is my favorite of your current books :)
I really enjoyed this story (at the time of wrighting there is only 12 chapters up) it has so far moved a little fast but it is not incoherint and it doesn't feel chaotic. I like the Mc he has so far been inteligent (letting the humans think they killed the commanders of the army and pulling back so that he could rest and requperate) and ruthless (killing thousands of humans with little to no remorse) I also enjoy his physical description (makes him sound like a baddass).
Overall I can not wait to read more at a later date.