Layers of Hell

Layers of Hell

by karami92

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The forces of the underworld have been plotting to rise to the surface world and make it the 1000th layer of Hell. To combat this, Grim faces impossible odds in a world where death is the only way to progress. He gathers his allies, acquires powerful magic and weapons, and finally confronts the final boss Lilith. After many grueling battles, he at last emerges victorious.

As for his player, he is the first to beat the Layers of Hell, the most expansive game known. As a special offer, he is given the chance at a New Game+, promising exciting new content. What could go wrong?

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Ringostrauss
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Great read, good blending of story and mechanics

10 chapters read so far, a cut above the average story on Royal Road.

Really enjoying the voice of the main character.  It has decent plot description and enough game mechanics without being overbearing.

There are some minor editing errors but nothing that detracts from being able to read the story.

Definitely an author to watch.

I would definitely recommend this to anyone who likes the genre even slightly, and even to those who just like fantasy.

n0x
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2 chapters out so far and this seems to be a really good "mc getting transported to game or fantasy world" story.

I love the longer chapters and the first fight scene was pretty good. Also MC doesn't completely freak, which makes this kind of story so much easier to enjoy.

Little foreshadowing of the world mechanics, which seem straight forward, skill based and not overly stat-reliant. Always a nice setup.

Looking forward to more.

Nox

Tilazt
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Truly an intresting take

A great read, very well started and also very well balanced between action and character developpement. I do worry about the long term though, with there being 1000 layers to go through, each with their own habitat.It will prove intresting how that is dealt with.

Strongly recomment you pick up this read.

francio
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I more or less enjoyed your other works, but to me, this seems to be developing into the best one. I really hope you resume writing and posting it soon. 

Thall230
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Loving it so far. Keep up the good work. I like the characters and the world building, I'm trying to think of something I don't like about this story and I'm drawing a blank.