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A short story. A group of Soldiers are sent on a suicide mission to destroy a stronghold of the Fraz, invading aliens made of flesh and plant. The group deals with its problems as it completes the missions. One bullet, One word, One punch at a time. Follow Shair as the 'Psycho' infiltrates the base; meeting enemies and annoying companions along the way to reach his Commander.

 

Sorry not really good at Summaries, but thats the bad synopsis version of the story. Also i apologize now so i don't have to later, my Grammar is REALLY BAD. I mean english is like my cursed subject. But i have a dream and i want you all to read it. So here it is.

Again REALLY SORRY ABOUT THE GRAMMAR, SPELLING, ENGLISH IN GENERAL.

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NeoMare
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It is a really interesting tale, despite of there being a few mistakes, the story itself is fascinating.