The Hesitant Magical Girl

The Hesitant Magical Girl

by Zarelliel

No matter how hard you work, no matter how much you try, there will always be somebody better than you. However, when that special someone doesn’t want to do what she’s better at, that is where a new story begins.

 

As much as she doesn’t want to, the fate of many rests in her hand. In the world of magic, a new challenger arrives.
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