Petmaster Evolutions

by darcolithe

Original HIATUS Fantasy Romance Sci-fi LitRPG Male Lead

This is a story about an ordinary earthling that sees the impossible and because of that gets kidnapped and introduced the the system called Odyssey which infects planets with mana to create monsters. This story will follow his journey through his trials.

I do not believe in overpowered so I will not allow the MC to get to god mode.

Since I started writing, the story has evolved some from chapter 1 on through as some stuff just did not make sense and in my mind the story has become clearer. Eventually I will have to go back and edit the beginning chapters to match the rest of the story but I do not have time at the moment.

I will update as often as possible but I work full time, school full time, and have a 18 month old and an infant. I make no promises on time between new chapters.

Honestly I did not expect people to follow the story and I just wanted to write for the fun of it and to see how the story that was running around in my head came out. I appreciate all of you who take the time to read my story and help me make it better by pointing out any mistakes I make. The only editing and proofreading I manage to do is the word app Grammarly so I miss things sometimes.

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Artmiser
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I’m enjoying this story it’s a interesting twist on alien abduction.  Keep up the good work.

RPGNovice
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So far I like where this is going. Keep it up. 

Clindos
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I've only read two chapters, but the story is promising. I want to read more!