The HOPE Engine

The HOPE Engine

by LynchWriting

Warning This fiction contains:
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When a game has the power to bring peace to the planet, you're damn right everyone plays. Every person on the planet can choose if they want to live their life in the physical world or the digital, and Quentin has been waiting for his chance to go all digital.

Once in the game, he chooses a powerful caster, but quickly finds out just how fragile he is. His advisor is a little girl, the village he builds is filled with raving lunatics, and the only edible food for miles around is poisonous to humans. But hey, his friends seem nice.

High level players are fleeing from their towns, beaten by a great force in the East. Will Quentin rise to the challenge and fight these evil forces? Will he pledge his allegiance to them instead? Will he find a meal that doesn't make him sick?

Find out in The HOPE Engine!

 

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a-izabel
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I'm really enjoying the story so far. This is my first litrpg and, I must say, it's quite mind blowing how mesmerised I am by this work!

It is amusing, capitivating and well written. The wirter takes time to explain how the game works, which is very useful to people who are not quite familiar with such literary genre.

Although it is not a finsihed work and the chapters are released as the author writes them, it is very easy to dive back into the "game" and not get lost in the storyline.

Definitely looking forward to see what happens next!

Whassup
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Monty Python creates Virtual reality

Low chapter release rate, hopefully caused by author wanting to polish them. I just feel I've heard it before (see GRR Martin release rates).

As for the story, there isn't much yet. However, so far it feels as of the producers of Monty Python were given tools to make VR game. 

MrMnds
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It's bad (for me) but author is a good guy

I heally disliked and somehow feel cheated after 16 chapters, bye.