One Piece's Messenger of the Sea

by bludvein

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When Adam Bailley gets recommended to read One Piece by one of his customers, he enjoyed it's absurdity more than he thought he would. Unfortunately God seems to have played a prank on him as before he could finish it he woke up in the body of a young fishman in East Blue. What's a guy to do in this situation?

OC + Strawhat fic. No devil fruit or plans for shipping with Nami or Robin, sorry. I want to keep the spirit of the original.

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MadHat3r
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Dis is some good weeb shit right here

Title pretty much says it all, this is by far the best one piece ff for the simple fact that the MC seems to be a person and NOT some two dimensional steriotype. 

Plz don't drop this like all the other authors who thought they could write a OP fan fic

Side note: if this story does become shit I will edit this review as needed so if your still reading this for some godforsaken reason you can hopefully give this a try now

Elina Violets
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Awesome OC in the world of One Piece

Although I am not the biggest fan of One Piece, this fanfiction deserves praise as I hope to continue reading it ^-^

Now onto 'why my star rates are so high':

- Style; although the author doesn't have a developed style of writing pretty much everything is readable and hardly ever confusing, so tops to that.

- Story; although a bit rushed, I can't find many faults with how it progresses, and find it nice how the timeskips are placed. Also, if by chance the author is reading this, I don't think the chapters need to be long, I rather have short & many than long & hardly any, and you seem to want this to so I support it.

- Grammar; As far as I've seen there are only a few phrases here and there that seem a bit odd, but everything else looks good.

- character; The maincharacter is fleshed out, but there haven't been many side-characters that could be fleshed out, so except a few character-interactions the mc has been pretty much a loner up till how far I've come [Life on Little island (5)] if I'm not mistaken, though I see the author developing in that area as we finally come in contact with our beloved One Piece crew. And lastl but never least I think there is also lot of potential with the 'alcoholic & gourmet' duo, I would love to see more interactions between them and maybe a backstory for the gourmet.

As a whole I really recommend  anyone to read it, whenever for the fanfiction part or not.

Good luck author, I can't wait for how you'll continue the story :3

 

Have a nice day~

- Elina Violets 

EroticHouseCat
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As a fan of OP, I was pretty excited to find this story, which follows a fishman as he traverses the grand line and grows in strength. This is a very new story so not much can really be said about it.

However the problem with this story is that it's rushed. During his bounty hunter days, only one bounty was claimed before a 6 year time skip with the main character suddenly being wanted by the world government (Which isn't unbelievable, but could still stand to be more flushed out). 

I understand wanting to get into the meat of the story quickly, however it's important to build a steady foundation for your story and its characters. (You can't necessarily assume that your readers will be familiar with One Piece). 

On another note, most chapters seem to be incredibly short, less than 1000 words. While this doesn't necessarily affect the story itself, readers may find it a bit annoying.

Otherwise, it's a good story and I look forward to seeing what happens in the future.

 

dumniezo
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I like it. It's fun, not badly written and the character is not starting out as an overpowered monster. Hopefully it continues like this, cause I'll keep on reading!

Royalguard000
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 I sad because this fanfic is ending in the fun partπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚