Lia and Lara will seek the One Piece

by Kestix

Fan Fiction ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Female Lead Multiple Lead Characters Reincarnation Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Now it's already the third round for the strange chicken loving being that was called Clair, Dexter and Kara. What will it do if it has the chance to roam the world of One Piece? And will it be able to hold on to its love of Kurama? Will the Straw Hats be their enemy, their ally or is there maybe no connection to them at all?

Follow it and see how it builds its own crew and sails the Grand Line, leaving chaos and doing questionable things on her road to the One Piece. But remember, only one thing is sure, there will be chicken! 

 

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Yeah, my third story, if you exclude the one shot^^. Hope I won't struggle with a good end, as I have with the others.... But be warned, there is a high chance that I will have to place it on Hiatus for some time. But that won't happen until I reach the current One Piece storyline. And maybe I will kill them off somewhere along the line, remember the Grand Line is dangerous^^.

 

The cover is made by NBadonK, and remade by OnLin3. The size was not matching RR's standards....

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1, Arc 1 ago
Chapter 2, Arc 1 ago
Chapter 3, Arc 1 ago
Chapter 4, Arc 1 ago
Chapter 5, Arc 1 ago
Chapter 6, Arc 1 ago
Chapter 7, Arc 1 ago
Chapter 8, Arc 1 ago
Chapter 9, Arc 1 ago
Chapter 10, Arc 1 ago
Chapter 11, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 12, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 13, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 14, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 15, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 16, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 17, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 18, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 19, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 20, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 21, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 22, Arc 2 ago
Chapter 23, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 24, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 25, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 26, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 27, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 28, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 29, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 30, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 31, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 32, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 33, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 34, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 35, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 36, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 37, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 38, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 39, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 40, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 41, Arc 3 ago
Chapter 42, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 43, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 44, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 45, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 46, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 47, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 48, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 49, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 50, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 51, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 52, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 53, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 54, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 55, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 56, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 57, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 58, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 59, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 60, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 61, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 62, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 63, Arc 4 ago
Chapter 64, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 65, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 66, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 67, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 68, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 69, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 70, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 71, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 72, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 73, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 74, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 75, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 76, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 77, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 78, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 79, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 80, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 81, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 82, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 83, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 84, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 85, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 86, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 87, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 88, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 89, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 90, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 91, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 92, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 93, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 94, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 95, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 96, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 97, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 98, Arc 5 ago
Chapter 99, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 100, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 101, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 102, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 103, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 104, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 105, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 106, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 107, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 108, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 109, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 110, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 111, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 112, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 113, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 114, Arc 6 ago
Chapter 115, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 116, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 117, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 118, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 119, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 120, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 121, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 122, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 123, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 124, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 125, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 126, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 127, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 128, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 129, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 130, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 131, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 132, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 133, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 134, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 135, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 136, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 137, Arc 7 ago
Chapter 138, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 139, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 140, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 141, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 142, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 143, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 144, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 145, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 146, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 147, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 148, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 149, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 150, Arc 8 ago
Chapter 151, Arc 9 ago
Chapter 152, Arc 9 ago
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reil-rhiil
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I love a good pirate story!

And that is what this is. A blood in the water, swashbuckling tale. Where the MCs are basically just straight up evil with masks on to hide it. 

Ironically. When they actually do put on masks they stop pretending to be good. 

And all this set in the world of one piece. One of my favorite worlds ever created. 

Lovely!

Darkorb
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No Harem (thumbs up) :) So awesome

Dude i support u all the way because there is no harem (which made this novel great so far and unique). Usually in these kind of novel i see over powered MC's making harems, but this one focuses on one, which makes it much unique and sets this story apart from all other stories which is much better. 

Just occasional spelling mistakes which the author corrects within a short while of release

Kestix prove that OP MC's can live withhout harems to those harem crazed authors and readers.

Dude also ur mass effect world was the best written novel so far (as of 4 chapter of Lia and Lara will seek the One Piece). So awesome writing skills, and story u displayed in there.

Polluaaaa
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 I enjoy reading your work,some times you seem to change from a steady pace of story and then have moments when you rush but I read your other stories and enjoyed them first ones good,I enjoyed the naruto one which seemed to change pace and the third one was great bearing in mind I watched some of the naruto anime and had no idea what to expect with the third one so for me that one was great I know one piece and thought the bit in story 1 was good so I'm really looking forward to this can't thank you enough for the many happily wasted hours keep up the good work.

Death God
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GREAT STORY HOPE MORE CHAPTERS KEEP COMING!!!!

all in all i really enjoy reading this story and hope it continues. This story and the naruto one inspired me to start writing and coming up with plans. For my own stories i haven't posted anything yet, but i just want to say this is a great story to read and i hope it continues hopefully becoming longer than the dexter naruto story. 

p.s. I am also saying this to hopefully get more people to read an enjoyable story. Also i hope this story can inspire more people to write stories of their own. 

Thanks for the story Kestix and please continue with it, please don't put it on hietus like so many other writers do to their stories.

kuroshiki
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Yay! Finally it's here! Btw i love all your novel starting from the first clair!

gaigous
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It's a Kestix original series

If you've found yourself here then you've either read the first two (Plus the One-shot) or you need to now, Nuff Said.

Kulingile
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Well, I don’t really know how to write a good review, english isn’t my mother language, so here my opinion in it’s crudest form. The story is getting better and better, Dexs/Clairs Adventure was funny but not so well written and this one is definitively way better. There is some kind of plot going on and there is more than one or two well developed and the MC is more and more likeable. Seriously his/her meeting with Kurama is the best thing that ever happened to him/her. In conclusion, very good story and author, recommended to anyone who is able to support a bit of cuelty.

Mr Weirdo
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I love this story and can only recommend it to anyone who likes funny and powerful mcs.

This is a story is great, because Kestix has a very unique writing style which makes the characters very lively and intersting.

It is one of my favourites and it makes me check ever hour for new Updates.

Thank you so much for doing all this!👍🏻

Dotlove
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Very enjoyable to read and all the characters are very well developed specially Lara, All the characters feel neseccary and interesting to read about. I would be ready and happy to branch out a bit more from the original storyline of One Piece, allthough ill enjoy the story either way!

Cestarian
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I manage to make it through close to 50 chapters before I had enough when Kizaru, the by far strongest admiral, is beaten by a fucking chicken that is a member of the protagonists crew (presumably the comic relief character...).

At this point, the power trip reached the same kind of levels as playing a video game with god mode, it stopped being fun, there's almost no force in the entire one piece universe that can touch our protagonists. Why? Because of their comic relief of a pet chicken.

I have no qualms about overpowered characters, but there's a limit to how overpowered you can make your characters before it just gets boring, and this story breached that limit.

What is the point of gathering power and training montages if there are no real adversities in the world that can justify using your full power in the first place?

The protagonists, while strong, shouldn't be anywhere near kizaru's level (and they know it), but their pet chicken can kick his fucking ass... Which would make their pet chicken a fighter at the same kind of level as gol d roger or sengoku, whitebard and shanks. (Whitebeard being commonly referred to as the strongest man in the world...)

This never semeed to be a very serious story, but considering the apparently edgy and depressing backstory behind the protagonists, I expected it to be something more than just Lia and Lara steamroll through everything.

The story is your average power fantasy, the style is your average power fantasy style, the grammar has a few holes in it but is legible, the story seemed to be heading down an ok path until a certain chicken was introduced to it, there are very few original characters in the story, the one piece character copies are fairly true to their original selves but there's nothing special going on in this department.

Our protagonists are actually mostly evil, but for some reason gather a crew of goody two shoes and put on a facade around them... Yeah I don't know, this stuff looked somewhat promising at the start but it's just not very good in the end, like your regular power fantasy everything falls into the protagonists lap and all challenges are designed to be a walk in the park (to such an extent where calling them challenges seems like too much). I still held out some hope for this stuff getting better because of the good reviews, but when Kizaru got his ass kicked by a fucking chicken I had my fill.

It's very clear the author doesn't intend to do much with the awesome worldbuilding that has been done for one piece, it's a world that superficially apepars like one piece, but under the hood is something else entirely.