Heroics of an Overlord

by Untitledauthor

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The story revolves around a man who often day dreams about being so powerful and able to fix all world problems.

One day his dreams become true but not exactly how it was supposed to be, summoned to a strange world and now an overlord who is seen as the root of all evil, Eli will now plan to work in shadows to see if he could still achieve world peace in his new home. Will he really do so or will he fool around?

The story will take us in an adventure, suspense, comedy, misunderstanding, action and finally unleash a tale never heard before. A tale of a misunderstood hero who is also a demon lord. 

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Sooo... This story is different...

The Synopsis so far does not seem to fit with what I have read.

The story feels kinda all over the place? It is a mish-mash of culture...

You have shinobi's, Demon lords, gods, magic, Hogwarts(ish) school, Albert Einstein... 

You have Igor, with Dracula (cough) I mean Alucard, the Demon lord.

You have the superstitous locals, and the arrogant/entitled nobility. 

With all the different idea's Slapped into this, It could have been a good/interesting story, but how it was put together?...

No thanks, not for me. This just feels, well... Not sure how to describe it other than Forced... Like, for myself, I had to put in real effort to read up until I could find the will to go on. So, yea.

Give it a try, you might like it.

I did not.