Fork This Life!

I found it!!!! I read the first couple of chapters and then left it but I forgot what it was called. for a long time I was looking for books about spoons...

Amazing story! I love reading every chapter of it!

Style: Awesome! I truly believe that I am experiencing life from the point of view of a... fork. I love how the author makes the boxes very nice and tidy, but thats just me. Personally, I would like a bit more point of views, but overall, a very good style!

Story: Ask a random person to make a fun, intriguing, and awesome story about a fork. Odds are (unless you asked this author) that the story would be very mediocre with a fork being super overpowered with a harem and stuff. Yet this author makes the story of a fork super fun and awesome! Surprisingly, I enjoyed the grinding elements of the story. 

Grammar: Great grammar, and I don’t mean that in the correct sense. The grammar (length of sentences, whether the sentences are complete or not, the intricacy of words) successfully imitate the fork’s mental state at that point of time, and I truly appreciate that nice touch. Other than that, I found very little examples of unintentional grammar mistakes.

Characters: All the characters are genuinely lovable, endearing, and fun, yet they are quite flat and one dimensional. Would love to have some great character development later on!

Overall, amazing story about a unique topic. I highly recommend reading this, and I greatly commend the author for successfully writing about this topic.

When i read i book i like to have an experience. This experience can be many things and the better it is the more likely i am to enjoy the book.

When i read an adventure book i like to see something or somebody handle new things, areas, people and see how she/he/it overcomes them.

The author claims this story to be an adventure book but the only thing i read so far is the internal monologue of a sentient fork. Altough you could argue with me that that is the point i can't help but feel cheated.

I highly recommend the author to do some world building. Because of the nature of our mc (no spoilers) this is very hard so i suggest the ussage of different pov's to make up for this.

The author of this story is clearly a very capable person seeing how he/she succeeded in keeping me hooked on the story of a fork so far so i'm sure he will be able to improve.

P.s.

If the author or somebody else doesn't share the same opinion as me or if i made a mistake somewhere feel free to call me out. I will react and/or adjust accordingly.

WHY THE FORK DID I READ A STORY ABOUT A FORKING FORK.
WHY DID I FORKING LIKE IT? WHY WAS IT SO FORKING GOOD?

WHO PUT SO MUCH FORKING EFFORT INTO WRITTING A STORY ABOUT A FORKING FORK?

I WAS WAY TO FORKING SELF-AWARE WHEN I READ THIS FORKING FORK STORY!

I read almost 500 pages about a living fork. Admitedly the fork had some amazing abilities but still.

The first 6 chapters are quite repetitive. Like soufdeboef says, its the monologue of a fork, however after that it gets better as more interaction takes place.

Im hoping to read more of this interesting story.

Best story on rrl 

My mind has been enlightened on how many fork jokes are possible

Kind of a fake five star review, but I think the story is hilarious and want more people to see it.
I don't necessarily think you actually deserve five stars, but by policy if I care enough to review, I'mma leave a five star.

Now, onto places to improve:

Characters are fucking HILARIOUS, though at chapter 12 and the Fork seems scarily OP already.  It just absorbed it's way through a living enemy?  I get it did it through the robot, narrative reasons and falling.  But being able to absorb anything is concerning.  Should probably put some rules on that, like 'only things served as food or potentially digestible/consumable, or things not protected by Willpower' or something.  Be cautious.

Thoughts and stream-of-consciousness writing is quite amusing, but a lot of the time lead to run-on sentences, poorly constructed thoughts, minor confusions.  It's not polished and doesn't flow nicely - which is perfectly fine for a webnovel, it communicates what it needs to and it's hilarious.

But it's something I'd be annoyed by if it were published.  Compare to, say, Brimstone Fantasy, which is much cleaner.

Alrighty, cheerio my good chap, and may the fork be with you.

One of the few on rrl. The first few chaps are a bit rough around the edges but forks arent sharp to begin with.

Surprisingly, I enjoyed a story about a fork... I don't know how I should feel about this. 

But, well I think you should give it a try.

I'd say that the only real flaw is how uninteresting a story about a fork seems at first sight (thus possilby less reader that starting to read this kind of story).