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Dilapidation wrought and almost unrecognisable for everyone but the supremely knowledgeable. A gym on its last legs and two teenagers on similarly flimsy foundation form a new duo under the age-old name.

Juggling hobbies, jobs, intergalactic arena, all whilst maintaining an active and uncompromising school life.

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